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Cinnie 1/16/12 . chapter 8
I was sniffling through this whole thing. Those last to lines selaed the deal though. *am bawling*
Maelle Robins 2/6/11 . chapter 1
It's funny because I read White Fences and Apple Trees before this, and when Nathan got introduced it made me feel bad cause it almost felt wrong. I guess that is more of a compliment to the other story...ah well great job and keep doing BBM things pleeeaaassseee.
The.Dust.Of.Jack 6/8/10 . chapter 8
My gosh, you moved me to tears. I dunno if I reviewed your other Brokeback Mountain story but just wanna say theyre fantastic. read White Picket Fences too many times to count, its such a good one.

First time I read this one, and it was a bit strange at first. but then i realised what was happening and it just broke my heart. The end was lovely, and I only wish there were some more of your stories I could read (cos i haven seen, read or whatever NCIS or Newsies, etc). Thank you for 'em, 'cause theyre he most beautiful things in the world, for sure.

Jack
hope and fate 3/22/10 . chapter 1
Sweet hope&fate xx
Jabin 1/7/09 . chapter 8
It probably shouldn't be legal for someone to draw out so many emotions from people but you do it beautifully anyway. I can't add anymore praise really. I've run out of words. Yet all I said about your other story 'White Picket Fences and Apple Trees' applies to this one too. 'Close Your Eyes' truly did have me in tears. I almost feel like I should be annoyed that you have a power with words that can make me feel like crying. However I can't deny that you have an amazing talent and it shouldn't be locked up so stuff the 'legalities' of the situation. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
alex's wonderland 1/2/09 . chapter 1
I've ready your other BBM story, White Picket Fences and Apple Trees, TWICE. And, I just finished reading this story.

They both made me cry. They are both beautiful, and absolutly amazing.

PLEASE write more BBM stories because you are so good at it. You are an extremely talented writer, so keep it up!
Shiimall 9/28/08 . chapter 1
I really have only one thing to say about this: Wow.

For the first time (EVER) while reading a fanfiction, I was left in tears, not knowing how to review or what to say. I have no criticism at all for you, except to please write more BBM fics soon. I truly enjoyed reading this, and look forward to many more things from you.

Shiimall
Phantom Thief Zel 8/2/08 . chapter 8
Oh my goodness. You won't believe how much I just cried...

This is simply too sad and beautiful for words.

I'm amazed.
Siese 7/26/08 . chapter 8
Geez...I bawled when I read this. Wonderfully written. You have the characters down perfectly. Made me cry, which always means it's good. Amazing. Great job.
SilverrAngell 6/12/08 . chapter 8
Ok, I have to say I like this story better than the Picket Fence one. I guess I like canon stories better.

I thought you did a good job of getting the kids to figure out what happened between Jack and Ennis, without Ennis being out of character and telling them everything. Loved it! :)
Kiki75 6/11/08 . chapter 1
I read this after "White picket fences and apple trees" and really made me CRY!

English is not my mother language, but I really love your way of writing. Good work!
Hatari 6/6/08 . chapter 8
I cried like a damn baby.

Thank you for writting this.
Bunny Wigglesworth 4/17/08 . chapter 8
you write very well, you should write more stories like this.
limonade 12/2/06 . chapter 8
ah! beautiful ending! I can't even read anymore because I'm crying and my eyesight is all blurry, and dammit, it was a beautiful story
Kotohiki-kun 9/26/06 . chapter 1
Another knockout story, more melancholy than the other BBM. I love the way you put the conscious world in italics, as if the dream world is more real than the waking world.
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