Sweet and sad. Great job, SpeakingThroughWrittenWords.

HOWEVER: the spelling and grammer mistakes took away from the story. You should really fix that.

Wow...I really do envy your writing ability! I love how you showed the relationship between Dib and his sister. This is incredible AND its IC! The song fit very well!

Good story but... me confused. good! but strange... excellent!

Oh, and...well...umm...there were some tiny little grammatical errors. heh. well...um... LUVED IT!

I loved it, and I suppose it wouldn't be fair for me to not favorite it because I don't care for the song, so I will favorite it.

This songfic is the best songfic I've ever read. If I ever write a songfic, I may do the two line lyric thing you did, if that's ok with you.

I love the ending too!

You did very well with Gaz. It can be hard to work with a character like that. I swear though Gaz just might grow up to be a hermit considering how much she hates attention. Great job again, STWW!

i like the way you made this storry!

i liked it a lot...and...it was great!

Hmm interesting

DOES Gaz care or DOESN'T she? Make up your mind

This is a very interesting piece. I'm not totally sure about it, but the shroud of mystery really adds intrigue to the story. I like the imagery and details. Do hope you don't mind if I add this to my C2.

Hm... I thought this was really good. The spelling and grammatical errors were kinda distracting, but I thought this was great otherwise! I loved how you were able to take such an overly-used idea (Dib being miserable) and make it into something that stood out among the crowd. Awesome job!

Navajo Skinwalker? *is particly horrified* *shrug* Must be my ancestor.

The transistions made this story have a nice flow.

Well this was an unusual fic, I'm saying this because you had Gaz In and Out of character in the story and that's something that I haven't read on another Zim fic up to date, as for Dib well you did a good job describing his misery.

Extra points for the song by the way.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.