Wow, I found every single one of these stories to be absolutely fantastic. The way you shed light on parts of the series' storyline, the characters in different situations, the details, everything was amazing. I hope someday I can write like you, as authors such as yourself seem to set the standard that I often strive for. Amazing job!

I about died laughing when I read this.

Razer is CLUELESS about what happened. ALL those mooks are! If they had a clue about WHAT Jak did, and what Daxter IS...

ho boy.

God, that's freaky.. I was just thinking about that scene between Jak and Keira earlier today, and I was so freaking pissed at her- how she could just judge Jak and jump to conclusions about him, without knowing anything. This settles my sanity a bit. All these one-shots are fantastic, by the way. The world needs more quality Jak and Dax fics. :)

Aw that was sweet and cute.

Hmm, why aren't there any reviews of this chapter? I was browsing around and happened across this one-shot again, and I remember this is one of the first and most memorable one-shots I read when I first entered the fandom. I read it today and I still really enjoy it... I love the concept. These are my two favourite characters EVER, and I never thought how any sort of meeting between them would pan out. I loved how their personalities clashed, they were both delightfully in-character, and the whole thing seemed pretty fitting in the aftermath of Jak 3. It's interesting that they were so evenly matched - is it strange that I enjoyed it when Torn hit her, and then she hit him back, and they just kind of glared at eachother?

Anyways, this goes on my fav list, and I'll probably come back to read this later because I love it so much.

-Five Minute Obsessions

That ending made me "aw". And it takes a lot to get me to aw.

You're very strong with dialogue and capturing everyone's characters. It really shines through here because you're using Daxter's POV - it was so cool to read, I felt like I was actually in Orange Lightning's head.

Interesting take on the whole Jak/Ashelin thing. Even though it's an anti-pairing fic it puts some sense into what Naughty Dog did, even if it seems they did it with no rhyme or reason.

aw, that was so sad your an awesome writer.

oh my god! you are an amazing writer when i read "look at me" tears were in my eyes. you are amazing.

That was a big update...Great stories! The last one was the saddest...no matter how many times I read these, they're always wonderful.

mwah! that was so sad! and poetic, but mostly sad. and good.

mah! it's been so long since you wrote anything, i was begining to wonder if you'd fallen off the face of the planet and i was going to have to go get cloud to find you and bring you back...^_^
this chapter was so cute and sad, but it was a friendly and familiar form of sad. daxter got to show his...er, warm and fuzzy side... and it was so cute! great job with this one.

Damn, but that was sad. I love the take you have on Dax and Jak - very sweet, very poignant. They really do mean a lot to each other... I especially like flux, in review, and absolute zero. I hope you have more of them coming! Perhaps even a multichaptered story? Maybe a continuation of absolute zero - much as I like angst, it would be really nice for Dax to not be dead...

WOW this pairing is new to me, I've never thought of it. I'm more of a RazerxRayn or RazerxKeira fan. I liked it, Seem was little miss tuff girl and Razer was his usual lady's man self. I liked how she said they gutted her temple like a fish, that was my fave description. Nice nice, I wonder what a multi-chap on this pairing would be...

Oh man Jak was cold in this one. Very cold, I dunno if I could picture him as that much of an ass but then again, with all the shit he's been through, who knows. OK next one. ::scurries off to next chap::