Cute. I liked the ending and the whole cookie bit was lovely. Nice set up and delivery.

I really like your stories and how you write it based on Mag's kigo100 drawings.

i enjoyed it, good work.

hehehe aww

great story but... i dont get the last words... what is the signifigance of the our kids? but i have to say very cute story i really enjoyed it!

Aww! That was so cute. Great story. I loved it. Please, keep the great stories coming.

Cu~te. Well written as well.

Your story was alright but it wasnt the funniest i have heard Im still adding it to my favourites list though!

cya

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another unbelievably adorable story. i'm really loving these stories.

hahah
so funny. Great work.

really nice one-shot sweet but not overdone! loved the ending as well. x