LOL i dont get it what was the jacket? :S where'd that come from. hahah I liked it though :D And I dont think they were OOC :D

-jellay

WOW. this is a nice story. Love it!

TYPOS:

*to repay the kindeness back, right?
-spelling..
*At tleast not now.
-a double t..

well if there was more.. i overlooked it.. :D

the story was so cute!! i loved every moment of it!!.. it wasn't ooc for me.. just the perfect blend.. :D

keep up!:D

AWW THAT WAS AWESOME!

that was maybe a little ooc because natsume wouldn't follow mikan on a 'friendly get together' with another guy but if he did i guess that's what would go through his mind and i think he would eventually crack if the guy was really pervy. loved the fic. keep up the good work. i hope to read more from you and you're right... alot of people do love WizdomGoddess... i'm a huge fan of her work lol specially "mikan wears a bra". she sorta got me into Gakuen Alice ^_^ i'm thankful.
[x]...Springy...[x]

I'll give you an A+ for that great story!! It was so cute that you made Natsume all jealous and still made him "Natsume" and not too cheezy.. its just right.. :D

Hello! ^^

That was a great story, i really liked how you made Natsume steam with jealousy. ^^

This is a one shot right or not.. if it isn't that you have to update. ^^

But if it's a one shot then it was one of the best ons shots i've read so far. ^-^

Lol...update!

that was a long story! woww bye,bye!!

Love mellanie

Ah this is so cute!

I like it...i think...!!

It pleased him.

The irony.

that was funny.
and earlier in the story when he was have a memory of Mikan crying all dirty and stuff, was she raped or something? o.O do you even know? T.T? this was a good OOC. Natsume was funneh. He reminded me of a guy i know. o.O in fact they are exactly alike (the natsume in THIS story)
i'm adding you to favorites

that was not OOC...natsume is really like that when he's jealous...pls update soon...thanks ^_^

It wasn't OOC at all! Love it, actually. It was funny too. Keep up the great job!! :) 10/10! Kawaii!

Actually, seeing as their older, it hardly seems out of character at all. In fact, you captured a jealous Natsume beautifully! *laughs* To my favorites this goes!