It was okay, save a couple of discrepancies, that spoiled it.

First off, there were some parts that I didn't get. If the plane crash had occurred twenty years back, then I doubt the Get Backers had even been born, or if they had, their business hadn't existed. But all right, we're dealing with supernaturalism here, so who says ghosts can't keep up with the news. (No, seriously, I'm not being sarcastic here.)

That doesn't seem to explain how or why the pilot would call Ban to ask for a recovery, only to tell the Get Backers to leave when they arrived at the airport.

And if Ban didn't mention his name, then why would Takayama know him only, and not Ginji as well, (to assume he was familiar with the Get Backers)?

Secondly, where is the horror? It wasn't scary or anything to denote the genre in the least. Supernatural. Yes. Horror. ?? Erm...

Secondly, the scenery shift is barely prominent. I do believe QuickEdit swiped it, and you haven't really specified where the Get Backers are currently, in each part, so it can get a bit confusing. And different people's dialogue in the same paragraph gets a little hard to follow as well. Maybe you could add a horizontal bar or two, or just specify locations.

Thirdly, there were a few grammar ("Ban rose an eyebrow"— which should've been "raised") and spelling errors like typos.

Fourthly, what I'm about to say next is entirely up to debate, but Kazuki isn't the type to be smirking so easily, and Hevn isn't the type to be smiling in that kind of situation. Didn't you kind of swap their likely facial gestures?

hey grl, dat was soo totally cute!!
i love ban!!
i love ginji!!
soo.which one do i get??

whoah. No wonder Yukito was acting a bit weird. Anyways I wanna know what he wanted to recover, probably his wife? O well, nice fic! That sure scared the Get Backers.

Whoa! Perfect plot for a halloween story! That's nice.

And Yukito's a ghost! I didn't expect that. Still it was nice.

ooh, nice twist at the end, awesome story! could have used some more description of the environment, but the storyline was great.
have a nice day :)

poor ginji, he just had to pee and ban wasn't being very patient. thanx for the story. it was very funny