These are things I can see in Nny's Die-ary and the boy and the shadow is just what I expected from Squee.

This sounds EXACTLY like it came out of Nny's diary. This is great. :) :favs:

What's so bad about the envelopes?

Very entertaining. A lot of it was funny, and a lot of it scared the hell out of me. Nearly all of it did both at the same time. Johnny's ramblings are totally appropriate. Kind of wandering and nonsensical, but somehow, you know exactly what's going on.

The envelope thing was funny, although I must confess I don't quite understand it.

I hate can openers.

I love. Me love. Good. Good for Nyx. You on Favorite List now. Me talk like Hulk. Gr.

Anyways, dear, great story! I love it!

Yours Until Mutant Pineapples Eat My Brains,

-Nyx

You caught Johnny's personality well. And the sort of things Squee would write too.

Those envelopes can be right bastards sometimes.

That was great! Pure Nny writing.

Cool story. Most of the entries were believable Nny entries, I thought. I like the way you're able to give just enough to get the imagination going before leaving it off so that you're not sure you WANT to know what really happened: "Then I don't remember what happened. I'm out of nails though." "I really hate envelopes." Stuff like that. Squee going crazy and being institutionalized tickled my fancy, as did the fact that he's writing stories and sharing them with Nny. The Shadow story entry was particularly good. :)

*twitches* yeah, great entrys, yeah great, *twiches* wonderful... yeah...

It looks like NNy hates envelopes! Yes. I love how you wrote this, sounded as if Vasquez (or Johnny 'imself) was writing it. Envelopes! Wonder who Todd's shadow was. .
Peace and many beans,
L. Astarael

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That was lovely. An envelope gave me a papercut on my tongue one time.

This was really good. I loved the dark humor in it. It was well written, it really sounded like Nny wrote it. I thought the part where Johhny wonders if his life is just a dream was very interesting.

This was really good. I loved the dark humor in it. It was well written, it really sounded like Nny wrote it. I thought the part where Johhny wonders if his life is just a dream was very interesting.