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| Jaded Delirium 2006-10-25 ch 1, | abuse'your cute little butt was simply to die for' I was laughing so hard at that part! Her pov was great! |
| deletedaccount1 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abuseI simply love how you experimented with the Witch of the Waste's perspective in this snippet. Her thoughts were insightful and captivating. I thought you managed to portray her character perfectly. I love the moth/flame imagery; that was very creative. I also love how you scorn Sophie's character; after all, the Witch of the Waste would not reserve kind sentiments for a girl who stole Howl's heart when she couldn't. Short but probably better than a number of the longer fics on this website. I thought "His Heart" was very well written and unique. Excellent job! |
| FeatheredTenshi 2006-06-12 ch 1, | abusewow! Your words and voice are like poetry, the story flowed so easily when I was reading it. Short, but sweet, and got the point across without rambling. I could almost hear the voice of the witch in my head. (or maybe I'm hearing voices again! Kidding! I'm not crazy. : P ) I am surprised no one else reviewed! Well... good work! Yay! ; ) |