 Coco-Minu 2008-11-02 . chapter 1Shikamaru needs to watch his mouth. |
 Haley07 2008-05-23 . chapter 1 Aww! That was so sweet! I loved how in-character they all were, epecially Chouji. Shikamaru was really harsh, and I think he care for her little more than just an annoying person, but I still loved the story. 10/10 |
 tricia868 2007-12-03 . chapter 1I adore this. It's by far my favorite of your fics. It's sweet and cute, but serious enough balance it out. |
 Lintu Hitose 2007-09-30 . chapter 1*tear* sniff...sniff...thats so sweet. nice story. finally ino gets it :) |
 smm 2006-10-08 . chapter 1Yay ChoujixIno...sweet story. w00t for epiphanies! |
 yllom21 2006-09-10 . chapter 1Very nice story and I enjoyed how you wrote Ino. Ino, like Sakura, eventually grows up and gets rid of her Sasuke obsession, I think you described the process wonderfully. Cute job and wonderful story. |
 Pylea Princess 2006-07-21 . chapter 1yay! it's cute!~ |
 Vbabe11 2006-07-21 . chapter 1aw! "I'm starving." That's my favorite part! XD |
 Taxxed 2006-06-15 . chapter 1Cute, yeah, and in-character. Good story, and I liked the character's interactions. But you might be a little better off if you kept the whole story in one tense - as you tend to shift from past to present. I think it'd be better as a whole if you stuck to the present tense style of writing you had in the first few paragraphs. |
 c0nfid3nt-Hinata 2006-06-10 . chapter 1Hey just wanted to say good story!! it was cute, and you never know that could happen! |