This story was so great! I loved how funny Marluxia, Zexion, and Xaldin were. Demyx was cool, and I really loved the AxelxLarxene fluff. Yay! Great job with this! ^_^

I LOVE THIS FIC!! *hands over cookies* I love happy endings... though I had trouble keeping track of all the non-Organization shinigami. Ah well. I still loved it!!

Emily: one question... WHY DOES EVERYONE HATE DEMYX?!?!?!?!?!
Isabelle: they don't. they just think he's an idiot.
Emily: But WHY?!?!
Jenny: 'cause he is.
Emily: gr...

Nyah, Xemnas was crazy, but he was smucked!
Nice Ending!

Great ending! You're on my author alert so I'll be reviewing you soon!

Keep it up!

See ya!

A sequel? Cool! They both did disappear and Demyx became a summoner!O.o! Anyway, perfect ending. Axel get to see Larxene again and Marly has a new goal in life!
Marluxia: ANd starting off with you! HOW MANY TIMES I TOLD YOU NOT TO CALL ME MARLY!
Me: But I like calling you MArly. By the way, where's Larxene?
Marly: Having a date with Axel now. Hey!
Me: Hmm... Are you going to have RUkia and Ichigo this time? Anyway, great story, hope you write more!

YES! MARLUXIA LIVES! I really liked your story while it lasted!

good for them. Demyx and Axel finally get the girl, Marluxia cant get neither, and everything is back to normal. Excellent stry and I cannot wait for the next ones to come out. And yeah, It figures that a bunch of little kids would be the ones to help Demyx propose.

WOOT! Can't wait for the grand finale! ^_^

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BEST FIC EVER! LOOK FORWARD TO DA GRAND FINALE! WOOHO! YAY aXeL!

Great chapter! Can't wait for the finale!

See ya then!

Yay! You finally updated!
Larxene: WHat! O.O! I thought you were still mad at her for killing me!
Me: NO! I just went to go attack Saix.
Larxene: Saix!
Me: Yeah, I found Saix as a ghost too. So I use Thor to attack him.
Larxene: Oh,then where's...?
SAix: I'll get you for this SOnicchica!
Me: I forgot to mention that he somehow turn himself into a hollow, so I suggest we run while we wait for the final chapter. Wait final chapter already!
Saix: GET BACK OVER HERE!
Larxene: Let's go!
Me: Update soon!

sniff you killed larxene now i'm sad. oh well continue onegaii must know how axel deals with xemnas

I MUST SEE AXEL'S BANKAI!! I MUST SEE AXEL'S BANKAI!! Update soon, k?

I'M SO GOING TO KILL YOU FOR THIS! (Sobs,) Now I need a tissue too! (Shaking hands,) Anyone has a tissue?
Larxene(ghost): NOW I"M GOING TO HAUNT YOU!
Me: Larxene! (Tries to hug her but just went straight through her.)
Larxene: Great, how am I going to hit you now that I'm a ghost! And by the way, I NUMBER XII! Not XI!
Me(SObs some more): Come on out Thor!
(Thor comes out of nowhere)
Me: At least I still have you... (still sobbing.)
Larxene: Hey how did you control Thor?! I'm a ghost here, still here! Fine I'll say it. Update soon and hey, where are you going!
(I took off with Thor.)
Larxene: I think you better start running.