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| WuHaoNi 2006-06-17 ch 3,  | abuseHmm...okay. It's a lot of information to take in one shot. Why don't you break up the different casefiles into seperate chapters? That'll make it easier to read and comprehend what people are reading. This isn't a flame; call it constructive criticism. I'm kind of confused about the new characters. You might try including why they're there in the precinct in the first place. For example, how they transfered. More than just the background information in their bio. ~WuHaoNi~ |
| Manhattan SVU 2006-06-11 ch 2, | abuseI like it alot! PLease keep going. |