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Ami-Lili
2004-12-02
ch 1,
abuseI wonder a lot why people like to write about what happened to Josh. Then people act like it really happened, that was what happened like "Oh! I always wondered what happened to Josh!" But it doesn't tell you. I also would have liked more seperated paragraphs. It was hard to read it in those huge chunks of words.
Sioban
2004-02-15
ch 1,
abuseOué ! *lol*
Viveu les fins supernaturelles-super-extra de notre pauvre Josh !
^_^
So, good mini-fic' ! I like it... *tremble*
Really Bad Fanfiction
2003-11-04
ch 1,
abuseHorrible, horrible, HORRIBLE! You took everything good out of the Blair Witch Project, and replaced it with garbage. I have said this several times before, and will say it again: The frightening thing about this movie was the vagueness, the ambiguity. Descriptions of the "witch" simply ruin everything.
anonymous
2003-09-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is not very good I am afraid. I think you could have gone into a lot more deatil, and you could have imagined it a lot better rather than just stabbing Josh.

But hey, I'm not a writer.
anonymous
2003-09-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is not very good I am afraid. I think you could have gone into a lot more deatil, and you could have imagined it a lot better rather than just stabbing Josh.

But hey, I'm not a writer.
sugilite
2003-02-17
ch 1,
abusewow that was so good.

I watched the blair witch project yesterday (17th of february) and thought it was SO good!

So now I am obsesed and reading all the fanfics to go with the film. This is the first i've read and its brilliant. exactly what would have happened.

:D
krillball6
2002-12-15
ch 1,
abuseThat was os good!!!! I love it! I think that is is what really happened!:) Or somethignlike it.

~Krillball6~
thecowsaysmoo
2002-03-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was really good! I always wondered what happened to Josh in the end. That was really creepy with the little girl and the old woman. I really enjoyed your version of what happened to Josh, he was my favorite.
jen
2002-03-21
ch 1, anon.
abusehmm... interesting - good attempt. I enjoyed some of the descriptions of scenes, emotions. Thorough, yet not too overdone.
Evil Twin3
2002-03-07
ch 1,
abuseThat was pretty good...but still, it's hard to capture the essence of a movie whose scares are primarily created by your own imagination. Anyways, this was obviously your imagination, and congrats on that, that you had the stones to write a fic about what happened with Josh.

If you're obsessed with the blair witch like me, then you'd have already come up with like 500000000000 variations on how josh died. Anyways, good job, for your first fic.
np
2001-11-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseI wonder if there is such thing as witches and why are they evil. I think that a real witch should have a pure heart . I am so interested in superstitions and I wonder if the Blair Witch is real... Good story tough!
Meg the Egg
2001-08-11
ch 1,
abuseTHAT WAS SO COOL!!!!!!!!!!! But in the end of the movie, why did they hear Josh screaming? and what was with the loud booming noises? I didnt relly understand the movie so could u e-mail me the stuff back? my e-mail is kiniara@hotmail.com. BUT THAT WAS SO COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Demon of the Night
2001-07-23
ch 1,
abuseoh... good story .
Let Down by the "Witch"
2001-07-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseI HATED the movie. So anything you do would be an improvement. You started off well and I'm curious: shouldn't the little girl have been standing in the corner facing away from whatever was killing the people??? Like I said, I didn't like the movie, so I might be wrong. Keep going though, it could only get better.
Carly12
2001-07-05
ch 1,
abuseWow thats awesome!!! WRITE MORE!
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