Ah, I love this story! It's kind of weird, but funny, and besides, everyone knows weird is a good thing! Do you plan on writing more? I hope so!

Good work, your spelling and grammar seem to be improving. However, the connections between the chapters seem a little disjointed.

Another interesting chapter. Unfortunately, the updates come so slowly that by the time the new chapter's here, I forgot what happened previously! Not bad anyhow. Good work.

Nice story

Something odd is going on there.

Yes, journalism truly is a curse. Keep going!

Interesting. Keep going!

The story seems good, epsecially with Merwin and Dean, the alien-hunters, back.
I hope the Grand Councilwoman comes to protect Lilo and Stitch. It would also be dramatic if she gets kidnapped by Merwin, Dean and Area 1, and Lilo, Stitch, Victoria, the experiments, Penny Proud, Kim Possible, Ron Stoppeble, Rufus, Jake Long, Trixie, Spud, Fu-Dog, Jake's grandpa, and the Super Robot Monkey Team Hyper Force have to go to rescue her.
Good luck!

This could be fun, especially with the nerdy sci-fi duo from 'Sample'. :)

nice, i had a little trouble following what was going on but that might just be me. Alian humour, thats a nice bit of detail keep stuff like that up.

Nice. Looking foward to more.