It was vary good I like the fact that ther was a happy ending after all that sadness

That's so sad

well the first person writing style kind of sucks but whatever, personally i think writing a story in third person is better.

I really like this Nabiki. The emotions in this chapter were really well done, I appreciate the effort you went to to make my reading experience better.

Very nicely written story. The dialogue between the characters was very well done.

An original Ranma/Nabiki romance, and a rewarding read with a feel-good ending. Everyone in it is OOC, but that's excusable.

The writing is not of the highest quality (practice makes perfect), but it's good enough not to detract.
Recommended,
Mike

Nice story! thanks for sharing it :)

Came across this in the archives and enjoyed the #^** out of it. I'll have to keep an eye out for more of your stories.

Figured I simply had to give tnx for a fun fic.

I ahve to say that this is one of the best Ranma short-stories that I have read. The way that you did the chariters are excellent, you even have Ranma the way I would picture him without Genma's influence. Teh intreaction between Ranma and Nabiki is first-class. My only question is how did Nabiki lose her sight, obviouly with the scars around her eyes she must have been in an accedent. I do wish that you would do a sequal though. Keep writing ~Paladin13

Again, I think you have written a very kind and gentle story. It is well worth the time needed to read it.

When I first reviewed your story (Drifter950 2006-07-09 . chapter 8) and copied it for my family who loved it. Two months ago I picked up a nasty virus that my protection programs caught and deleted, but I had to reinstall windows to replace the parts damaged. Nasty THING! I decided to upgrade my Word Perfect package at the same time and found that it lost the contents of some of my fanfic copy files including yours. (mumble, mumble, drat^&#$.)

I actually think it worth it since it sent to find the story again and I found you had finished it. Again worth the read.

Like others have said, I look forward to reading more of your works.


May the MUSES (all9) always be with you!
-_^

Aw! So sappy and cute! We always need to read one or two of these day-lifters every once in a while. I just loved it-excellent work, m'dear!!

most characters were ooc but it was a very well writen, and nicely put together, love the ending.

Wow, just Wow! What an excelent story! I couldn't stop reading it!

Not bad.

This is an outstanding story. The only quibble I have is that Genma didn't get the ultimate beat-down that he deserves (Genma-bashing is one of my favorite themes), but life is usually imperfect, so I suppose I can live with it.

Very well done, indeed.

:)