Please update this is awesome!

It's been a very long while since you have last updated! PLZ continue this great story because I LOVE IT. ( Especially Willard x Melisha Tweedy's the best thing ever written!)

Oh, that's a very nice fanfiction!

You should really update this- it's one of the few stories where you see a little Mrs. TweedyxMr. Tweedy, which I like. :)

One thing though. Dialogue should be written like this, with tabs and stuff:

"Hi Solarity," Emmie said guiltily. "Sorry about the whole pizza fiasco..."

"Nah, that's okay. Sheela was asking for it anyway!" Solarity replied, laughing. The sight of Sheela covered in tomato sauce had been hilarious.

"Heh, well, that's true," Emmie snickered.

It just makes it easier to read :)

This is gonna be good. I'm fresh out of ideas right now for your story, but I can't wait to see who wins the show at Chapter 9. 'Til then, toodles! Congrats on this chapter!

That was so funny! I like the "Training day. Let's get up and go...in 10 more minutes." So the dog show chapter will be Chapter 9.

OMG, that was so funny. As a matter of fact, I'm gonna be seeing Over The Hedge today. Consider writing a sequel to this. I had an idea that there's a giant vegetable competition in Germany and every country is invited. Here, I'll give you a little preview of it. You should allow Gromit to speak in your sequel.

(Everybody is walking to Germany and keeping their vegetables safe in the wagons and everyone's asleep, except for Pilot, Gromit, Lady Tottington, the Tweedys, and Victor Quartermaine.)

Pilot: So let me get this straight. If we keep our vegetables safe from this "Were-Rabbit," we'll have nothing to fear?

Gromit: I believe so. Despite the fact about what happened last year that Wallace was the Were-Rabbit. Speaking of which, where is he?

Lady Tottington: It beats me.

Pilot: I'm pretty sure he said he was going out to find some food. You don't suppose it might be a repeat of last time?

Mrs. Tweedy: Don't be silly. I'll tell you once and I'll tell you again. There is no, I repeat, there is no such thing as a Were-Rabbit.

Mr. Tweedy: I'm pretty sure that it's just a story to get people to behave and stay in line.

Victor Quartermaine: Well, one time, Melisha, I was this close to getting him.

Mrs. Tweedy: Oh, shut up.

(At that moment, the full moon comes out and the lanterns go out. Gromit and Pilot hear a howl.)

Gromit and Pilot: The full moon's come out! It's the Were-Rabbit!

(Everybody wakes up in horror.)

Everybody: (repeating what Gromit and Pilot have said) It's the Were-Rabbit?

Victor: (puts his arm around Mrs. Tweedy, but it's around Pilot) Don't worry, Melisha. I'll protect you.

Pilot: (angrily) Victor, you have two seconds to remove your hand before I snap it off at the elbow.

Victor: Oh sorry. Thought you were Melisha.

(Pilot angrily punches him and Victor is knocked out.) N: These last lines were a parody of Home On The Range.

END OF CLIP

Hope my idea inspired you to write a sequel. So, until then, toodles!

Ooh, Gromit and Pilot are gonna fall head-over-heels in love with each other. I know it! I'm sure that once they win the dog show, they'll settle down and get married. If they ever have children, I'll give you a recommendation for names for the pups: Blossom, Buttercup, Sophie, Emily, Amelia, Westley, Amadeus, Elizabeth, and Terra. (I know seven of them were female names and the other two were male names, but they're my favorite names.) Oh and by the way, when are we gonna see Victor, Philip, and Preston? Just curious, yeah. You have earned a spot on my very favorite author list and that number is No. 1!

OMG, that was so funny. I liked when Wallace called Gromit a "mongrel." Why Wallace should be ashamed of himself for calling Gromit that? Another slipup like that, and then Gromit would just run away from home. I kind of prefer Gromit to Wallace. In fact, when I first was Curse of the Were-Rabbit and I thought Wallace was dead, when he was trying to save Gromit, and I began crying, it was like he was also my favorite character.

OMG, that was so funny! I liked the beginning of the chapter where Mrs. Tweedy grudgingly admitted that Mr. Tweedy was right and she was wrong. You're doing good so far! When's the "Over The Hedge" parody gonna come? Please do tell.

Ooh, this should be good! What if Gromit and Pilot fall in love? It'd be nice if they did! Can't wait for the actual story to begin! My warm regards to you on the new fan fic/crossover!