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Space Panda
2006-06-12 . chapter 1
Ano...O__o

I don't like the idea of being pregnant very much...Firstly, I have to tell you about some spelling errors, as I cannot keep my big mouth **.

Shut. Yeah.

1) Marico-NO Mariko-YES
2) Enma-dioh-NO EnmaDaioh-YES
3) What the heck is a Urisy?

Okay. On the whole, I liked it pretty well. I'm glad Muraki is my be-bah. Also, you could keep up the authenticity of the story by switching the following names on Edit.

Sheila: Shiira
Victoria: Uhh...just use Mizuki
Angel: Tenshii (meaning "angel" or "holy spirit")

Ano...lessee...Do you wanna start another plot on here? I wouldn't mind. ^^ Gawd, Oriya's a stubborn little bastard, isn't he? ^_^ If you DO wanna, here are some possibilities:

1) A basic college theme

2)A death theme, where either Tatsumi or Watari die, the other leaving to the human world and disappearing. Eventually, the one who died will go find them. ^_^ I think Watari would be interesting. ^^

3)The all-holy M-PREG THEME!

4)Tohma\Ryu action!

Okey-dokay! ^_^ There's ya go! Off to DA with me!
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