 GizmoBunny 2009-12-02 . chapter 1I know you left , but I seriously can't go without leaving a review for this story, even if you never read it.
This was amazing. I can't even describe the feelings I had when I reached the end of it. In fact, I still can't comprehend them. A mix between traumatized, delighted, disturbed, and utterly sad. To think of these dear characters going through that... It was Yuu who got to me the most, since he's so innocent and happy. Another thing I find sad is imaging how everyone died, and what the epidemic must have been like.
While it was not one of my favorites and for the sake of my emotions I'm going to try and forget it, I think this has gotten to me more than anything I've ever read. And not in a bad way. Thanks for the experience. |
 *_* 2009-06-14 . chapter 1 she ended up suicide *sigh* It's very scary that those ghosts still inside the school all along =-= |
 Mimichii 2009-01-02 . chapter 1Don't worry. I won't throw an apple at you.
I love the story...
Mwahahahaha.
It's true. ^-^
Keep smiling,
Mimi-chan ΓΌ |
 TheTragicWriter 2008-10-21 . chapter 1omg. sad but a beautiful story! loved it! |
 uke-sensai 2008-09-26 . chapter 1I cried... this story touched me very dearly...you portrayed what Hotaru should have felt...it was so amazing
the tragic thing that happened to Hotaru, and the characters, that were oblivious of their deaths...
it was so amazing |
 XForgottenxMemoryX 2008-08-04 . chapter 1I first read this story on another site, and it amazed me. You did a very good job in showing how much Hotaru changed, and how she felt inside.
I'm not bothered at all by the fact that she killed all her friends, and then ended her own life as well.
If you read this story while listening to the song "Selenite" by Rurutia, it makes the story feel very sad. I listened to that song while reading this, and I ended up in tears at the end.
This is a beautiful story, I must admit. |
 sweetcandy12 2008-07-19 . chapter 1that was so depressing... |
 Elv 2008-07-19 . chapter 1This story somehow and somewhat hurt my head. It's probably psychological, but who knows. But this story is really dark. Great job in writing this. |
 mIkanNatsUme13 2008-06-10 . chapter 1..aw..the story is great but sad..but i like it! |
 Abnormality Words 2008-02-09 . chapter 1Okay, I don't want to sound like an obsessed nationalist but this story gives me some political ideas rather than that "disturbing" effect. The fact that Hotaru has been given this task by the government is somewhat identical with corruption (or graft or whatsoever). I believe you have not written this to uncover this dirty side of politics (not only in our country) but the "Geez, why would the administration act so careless?" concept dominated my mind while reading this.
I love the way you portray Hotaru here. She is so in-character. Emotional inside, stoic and stubborn on the outside. Ditto to Natsume and Mikan. Though mentioning that "Natsume's not that stupid" do not help in explaining how he really knew what happened. Is he, by any chance, a part of the nasty connivance?
I suppose your style here is different from those of your other stories. The images I've formed while reading this are not as vivid as what I have with Christmas Memories (do not compare works, brainless reviewer!). But for me, the lines and the chronological flow of the story convey the intensity of sadness Hotaru has had. Good work with the psychological approach of telling the story!
The two men in white coats are effective as well. If I were Hotaru, I would also feel the same way. Talking malignantly about someone who's only behind them. Careless fools.
One question anyway. Was Hotaru handcuffed when she entered the car? I'm confused.
Waiting for Christmas Memories' Chapter 4,
henseishi-kun / Abnormality Words |
 RainbowPrincess326 2008-01-18 . chapter 1don't think lyk that!
i lyk this story although i'm not used in reading dark fics..
this one caught my attention, though i'm confused at first bwt wat really happen, u explai it well in the end.
i'm not good lyk others and you... but i juzt can't explain it!! *sweatdrop*
i lyk ur other stories too,, they are intrseting!
this is good... Lol |
 Dark Angel of Pain and Chaos 2007-10-19 . chapter 1Shouldn't it be 'a dish best served cold' not 'a dish best eaten cold'? |
 EnChan 2007-10-16 . chapter 1uhh... okay. that was weird.. but good. |
 hil2378 2007-08-27 . chapter 1omg!this fic is just so so i don't how 2 describe but is really sad n awesome |
 rainnie-chan 2007-08-16 . chapter 1wah !! >_<
i th0ught h0taru was the 0ne wh0 died ?!
this sp0oks me 0ut ..
but its great !!
REALLY REALLY great !!
luv it !!XD
and i th0ught Hotaru here have a mental pr0blem 0r sumthing ..
ehehehe ..^^ |