|Reviews for The Dead in School|
| Popotrat 12/26/11 . chapter 1
Everyone is dead :'(
| Miharu Endou 10/9/11 . chapter 1
Yeah. Mikan would most likely not notice she's dead in a situation like that.
And it's highly possible for Hotaru to get crazy, with her brain and all the expectations given to her.
| The Burnt Jewel 9/6/11 . chapter 1
But otherwise, you have described it most briefly and accurately :DDD
| Pechay 5/29/11 . chapter 1
| heart-teen 5/13/11 . chapter 1
well, i can say this is good *thumbs up! ;) it gave me a li'l creep when i realized it isn't Hotaru who's dead and a ghost but it is everybody in the academy and of course including Mikan who died because of Hotaru who had been made to invent a virus- a dangerous virus at that. though i can't help but wander that isn't Hotaru a genius with technology not with chemicals? from what i know, it's Nonoko who has a chemistry alice. um, oh well, don't mind me. it doesn't matter anyways. i also figured out that it's just appropriate too because Hotaru is a genius and the role is fitting to her too and it's your choice anyway! sorry for my blab, hahaha:))) i think as a reader that you're able to do something better than this! i know your good! *two thumbs up* JA!
| BlueJeanne 1/28/11 . chapter 1
I have only one word for this story. AMAZING.
Just the right amount of darkness!
I do feel sorry for Hotaru, though...
Well, anyways, you and your story make it to my favourites list!
| Nessie-san 8/26/10 . chapter 1
OMFG! This is amazing! I really love dark stories. And depressing stories. And happy ones, but that's beside the point right now! THIS WAS F*CKING AMAZING! I wonder, though, how was it that the disease didn't spread to the whole city? Anyway, with Hotaru as the only survivor, I think she really might kill herself. She's seems like such a dark character to me, anyway. She actually reminds me a lot of Natsume. They both put up barriers to protect themselves. They both love Mikan. They both love Ruka. They both know just how dark the world really is. They're both prepared to die. I mean, it's really amazing how alike they are. I found it less sad, and more...disturbing, I guess. Like you said. I love the darkness in it, it's so wonderful. Also, it's really creepy. I love stories like that. I already said that, didn't I? Oh, well. I didn't find any technical mistakes, so again, WELL DONE WizdomGoddess-san. Oh, and by the way, this story gets added to my favorites.
| sakuraturquiose 8/11/10 . chapter 1
I really cried when I read this. It's so sad. But I loved it. It sounds... Really true...
| The Fanfiction Writing Writer 6/21/10 . chapter 1
i LOOOVBE ur stories... pls write moreeee?
| Mythical Princess 5/13/10 . chapter 1
oh .. so everyone in the
Alice Academy is ... dead ?
| Gizmobunny 12/2/09 . chapter 1
I know you left , but I seriously can't go without leaving a review for this story, even if you never read it.
This was amazing. I can't even describe the feelings I had when I reached the end of it. In fact, I still can't comprehend them. A mix between traumatized, delighted, disturbed, and utterly sad. To think of these dear characters going through that... It was Yuu who got to me the most, since he's so innocent and happy. Another thing I find sad is imaging how everyone died, and what the epidemic must have been like.
While it was not one of my favorites and for the sake of my emotions I'm going to try and forget it, I think this has gotten to me more than anything I've ever read. And not in a bad way. Thanks for the experience.
| Guest 6/14/09 . chapter 1
she ended up suicide *sigh* It's very scary that those ghosts still inside the school all along -
| Vanilla Secrets 1/2/09 . chapter 1
Don't worry. I won't throw an apple at you.
I love the story...
It's true. -
| TheTragicWriter 10/21/08 . chapter 1
omg. sad but a beautiful story! loved it!
| uke-sensai 9/26/08 . chapter 1
I cried... this story touched me very dearly...you portrayed what Hotaru should have felt...it was so amazing
the tragic thing that happened to Hotaru, and the characters, that were oblivious of their deaths...
it was so amazing