Good plot and all. Suggestion: Mayb next Hao could countinue pretending to be Yoh during convenient times and then later kidnap Yoh to take his place.

This is just a suggestion, you dun have to really use it or wateva.

I didn't get this line..
“Yes, Master Hao,” the small boy replied but not without taking one last look at the couple below. “Hao Asakura, we’ll make you suffer bit by bit…”

You meant Yoh, didn't you?
Its good, but I'm sorry I didn't get the logic behind it..
Cheerio!
FreedomValentine

HOLY!
what on all heavens were u thinking of making Hao kiss ANNA>
too flattering i'll tell
but too disturbing
(shivers)to think of it is br!

Anyway... Nice story..
I'll look forward to it..

what are you doing write some more okay because i love this story so much please please please please please please write more okay

from
your
biggest
fan
ever
doggywuppy

that was so good this is my 30th time reading this story please update soon thank you

from
your
biggest
fan
doggywuppy

kl story. hao kl update

YAY u updated again ^^ thank you so much! (i finally clicked the button so that u could send me messages back haha)

>> wah! pls continue and UPDATE SOON! i just love HaoxAnnaxYoh... so pls...!^_^

Plz update soon!

Love,
Kagome Anna, forever InuYasha's.

OMG, thiss is the first HaoxAnnaxYoh fanfic that I had read in a long time, and I loved it! Update soon!

Love,
Kagome Anna, forever InuYasha's.

Nice fic u got here...So since u love Hao,will dis fic,by any chances,gonna b HaoXAnna story??I would LOVE dat 2 happen...Hehehe coz i also love Hao Asakura!so PLZ UPDATE SOON!PEACE!

>> wah! i always loved HaoxAnnaxYoh so i really like this one! oh pls., UPDATE SOON...! i'll wait!^_^

... this seems so familiar... did u re-posted it?

Back off Hao is my love! But other than that good story so far, I think I will keep reading.

Great first chapter!
It really has been a while since you last wrote a Shaman King fic, and this one is really good!
Update soon!

~Mei (DarkTaoAngel)