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blackangel1994
2007-12-13 . chapter 1
hi i have a idea why don't you write a diary of tetsu like what he thinks of hijikata and souji how abot that and the story that you are going to make about souji sounds like is going to be cool
ValarSpawn
2007-08-18 . chapter 3
I had just reread the Hijikata chapter...And I noticed that some of the lines echoed Lord of the Rings. Other than that, I have to say I find this hilarious and can't stop laughing every time I read it. "Ditch-san, Ditch-san!"

I'm looking forward to Kondou's diary, Yamanami's, and Ayumu's. Especially Ayu's. Please continue!
Golden Dim-sum
2007-06-10 . chapter 1
Wait! what wolves are linked to what? hey isn't li syaorans name little wolf or something..man it sucks to have his name
Evee-chan
2006-12-11 . chapter 3
This is like the most hilarious story I have ever read.

No seriously.

I haven't stopped laughing even now. I can see my mum looking at me like I have lost it and I guess I have. LOL
deichan
2006-11-18 . chapter 3
i died laughing reading this fic.it ROX.i'll watch out for ur stories.SHINPACHI'S DIARY NEXT!PLEASE!i'll give you chocos if you do...^^
Buffalocatz
2006-09-20 . chapter 3
I really liked this story- and since I really like the character of Saitou it would be fun to see his diary. Keep going! ;)
Rumour
2006-08-11 . chapter 3
Funny fic. :) As for other chapters to right...

It'd be fun to see Saito's... His diary would look like some cult spell book with needles in it and misc. buddhist seals on it with something Saitou-ish inside...

Tetsu/Tatsu's would be fun too... Tatsu would worry and complain... and Tetsu would... I can never get Tetsu's character so I won't say. :/

Or Yamanami's... I'd like to hear how Harada's tutoring is going.
Midori Ryuu
2006-07-25 . chapter 3
Definitely loved the story. I can't wait for more! Um... Saitou or Shinpachi would be fun to read, I think. And I'd rather like to read the OkitaOC story.
Midori Ryuu
2006-07-25 . chapter 2
XD You did a great job with Susumu, too. I loved the Sisterhood...

Susumu is really young in PMK, but the real one would've been at least 25 by this point.
Midori Ryuu
2006-07-25 . chapter 1
XD I couldn't stop laughing the entire time I was reading this. It's great! E~! ::Runs to read the other chapters.::
Mibu's Wolf
2006-07-25 . chapter 3
I say Tetsu. that would be funny to see
anaemicfaeries
2006-07-17 . chapter 3
Wonderful! Ah, poor Toshi! Heh he, love the way he exaggerates in his diary! He he, he really does have some poetic spirit, even if it isn't chanelled the right way. All we can say is--Please sir, can we have some more! ^_^
sai-bunny
2006-07-10 . chapter 3
could you do one of the trios diary entries? preferably harada's but maybe the spelling plroblems would make it unreadable. ^_^* or yamanami! anyway, i love most of your stories and this one has me laughing so hard i'm crying.
baby jen
2006-07-05 . chapter 3
Haha, most amusing! ^_^ Well, i love any souji fics i guess - so write away!
Anonymous
2006-07-05 . chapter 3
I think you should do a journal of Shinpachi Nagakura! or I guess you could just do one for the comedian Trio but... that seems kinda like cheating to me. *Shrug*
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