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Reviews for: The Real Thing
mikishew
2007-04-06 . chapter 1
Something seemed, a little, off about Yuki in this...he wasn't OOC, but I think this would have been better if it wasn't in 1st person.

Other than that, I adored it.
A-chan a.k.a Aphrodite
2006-09-22 . chapter 1
Aw, this is very sweet!
Xedra
2006-09-14 . chapter 1
Very nice! I like how you wrote for Yuki. :D
em-witchwood
2006-08-26 . chapter 1
I don't think Eiri was out of character at all. In fact, he was a lot more in character than he's usually written. It was really good!
Yuki-Mizu
2006-08-11 . chapter 1
very good. I liked it a lot!
YaoiSongstress07
2006-06-14 . chapter 1
Nyah ha ha! Shuichi's speed of speech amazed me to no end. I loved this! The ending was the deepest part of all. Sugary sweet piece! I love this to death...but I can't add it to my faves list...since it's been flooded, waah...
Kitty in the Box
2006-06-13 . chapter 1
i really love the story. its really short but it sure packs a lot of the good stuff in it. even the title itself is very catching and man! i really love it. thank you for sharing this happiness. i've added this to my fave stories list.
MidnightGenius
2006-06-12 . chapter 1
Seriously, I have nothing to do but giggle over this. I wrote a Gravitation fanfic once... *sigh* I got so ** over people asking me questions that I took It off. Oh well, maybe I'll repost it someday...
Gracey-J
2006-06-11 . chapter 1
Aw! That was a cute story!
Saint Germain
2006-06-11 . chapter 1
There is nothing better to sooth the soul than a little fluff. Very sweet and well written. I believe you got our Yuki down pretty darn well, even the well used asprin bottle in the kitchen cupboard. Cheer up! Ja!
Fiery Pixie Stik
2006-06-11 . chapter 1
^_^ This was cute. I loved it!
Miss Meehan
2006-06-11 . chapter 1
I think Eiri is totally in character here, grudgingly admitting without saying the words exactly how much he loves Shuuichi. Perfect.
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