Good story.

I throughly enjoyed this story. You took a fresh idea and turned it into something very interesting. Your portrayal of wolf packs and their behavior was very correct-you did some great research! (I'd love to have the links you mentioned at the end of the story, but couldn't find them on your LJ.) This story reminded me of why I loved the Julie's Wolf Pack books as a child. :-)

My one critique would be to reread the story and fix the few typos that were there. It slows the flow a little. I believe they were more towards the beginning and middle.

If you ever decide to write up a sequel for this or at least something similar I would be thrilled to read it! :-D Great job! It's going on the favorites!

You must continue this story and your other god damn

one's too, thi may seem straight forward but heck I

don't care! I love it.

I've never been a fan of the supernatural story lines, but this was amazing! I love how everything just seems to blend easily together. I just couldn't stop reading. Not a dull moment. Thank you!

I saw wolfkin was on so I started with this... as always, your work is supreme.

dude cool man like awesome I love all wolves. i love your characters . i love any kind of wolf i love baltoi love kiba i love all wolves

I Love it!

This is such a great fic i wish that you would please continue and write more to it soon. plzz... UGH you just have to love kenshin and karou as werewolves...ah! keep up the good work.

I absolutly love this story!In fact I love all of your stories!I do hope you'll be adding on to this one and soon:)

Nice job! I love this story. It is a mixture of one of my favorite show and my favorite animal. You are a good writer and I like the way that you showed the different ways that the packs are lead. You should write a sequel!

Note: I can't seem to find the deleted scenes on your live journal.

that was a really cute story! please keep writing stories such as that one i really enjoyed it!_!

cool, so very, very very, cool! love it!

update? soon?

Wow this story is really intersting i hope you write more

Wow this fanfic was the best ever i read so far! I mean the way you used Kenshin and Kaoru as wolfs was just amazming i was so upset to see you only had chapter 1 up Please finish it! (starts tearing up)

This was beautifully written. Kaoru's personality is developing very well. And I like that you're taking Kaoru and Kenshin's relationship slow and allowing it a strond foundation. Some authors tend to rush things. _ But I don't really get Yahiko role. Then again, its only the first chapter.

Please review as soon as possible. This is really good. Its going on my Fav. Stories List. _