Good so far. Update soon!

nice!please continue

Short but cute. What is Ty Lee doing acting all helpless? That's not her style. :) :P

Great chapter! Though waging should be wagging. Anyway, this is good!

what r the chances they don't meet again??

^^. Mai and sharp weapons, always a bad mix.^^

:( But at least you're not giving up on the story

ok

No problem. Though doesn't allow you to put author's notes as entire chapters. Anyway, I hope your move is successful!

It`s good though short=)

LOL. I love the ending. You have some mispellings of "collar" and and Firebend is one word I think... xD And "gazed" and girls has an apostrophe s. I suggest you get a beta-reader. But other than that, I loved your description and such. Please update!

omg, this is great! i've been searching for a really good story about ty lee, and i found it! please update soon, don't stop writing it! unless you want to make me sad, then you're just mean lol

Three words: PLEASE WRITE MORE.

with the right thoughts, this fic could get interesting

Its cute! Please update!