 SunMoonAndSpoon 2006-08-29 . chapter 1This was so sad! I loved it, the metaphors are the beginning were fantastic. I never could have thought of anything like that. When you said in your review of Burnt Rice that you weren't a good writer, I was kind of skeptical...you left intelligent reviews, which generally implies writing skills. I was right to be skeptical, you're great! And I'm really distracted right now but I'm gonna review anyway, damn it! Anyway I was slightly confused at the beginning but it made sense later on...my only thing is that to ME the Akito's-death-lifting-the-curse thing makes no sense. I don't know if it's canon and if it is I apologize...I just don't get why they wouldn't have killed off the God a long time ago if that were the case. But yeah, great, excellent fic, and thank you for your reviews of Burnt Rice. I hope you'll keep reading! |
 shesamonster 2006-06-11 . chapter 1I love you so damn much! Someone who hates Kyoru but still tortures poor Nezumi-chan. I love Yukiru so much, but this was so sad. I loved it very much; the emotions were deep and so real. It really is just like Yuki do distance himself from someone, particularly Tohru, to let her be happy even at the cost of his own.
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