I will readily admit that Peter and Ed were a bit OOC, and I did wonder where they got a computer.

However, I didn't particularly care. It was simply too funny to imagine Ed gagging repeatedly as they stumbled upon slasfics. And his initial excitement was hilarious!! "Hey! Lots of stories about us!" *laughs wildly*

Poor Peter and Edmund.

LOL! I loved it. So true boys... so true.

That is a nightmare waiting to happen. Peter and Edmund finding slash. What has the world come to?

LOL...THIS WAS SO PERFECT!! *dies laughing* You're brilliant, you're totally brilliant. Slash should be bashed WITHOUT MERCY!! WE MUST AVENGE C. S. LEWIS!! (Sorry...shutting up...)

TO MY C2! AND MY FAVES!! (And maybe even Knights of the Canon...)

*laughs*
I love this - Edmund's reaction is perfect for someone who would never have stumbled across such things before.
I agree completely with your stance, as well.
This is definitely a favorite :)

Yes! Someone agrees with me! No more slash and other nonsense!

VERY good point! There's so much disgusting slash/twisted romances here on Fanfiction, it makes me despair. I mean, what would CS Lewis think, if he could read some of the stuff on here? Or Arthur Conan Doyle? Or Tolkien? Great fic! ^_^

Excellent! A very well done bashing of slash, incest, Lucy/Tumnus, and Mary Sues.

I particularily liked the thoughtfulness of this line: “It seems,” said Peter, thoughtfully, “that in order for a story to be good it must have romance, and some people will go to any extent to get that.” He shuddered a little and muttered, “Does no one realize that there’s more in the world than romance—especially this sort?”

I loved how Ed kept gagging. I loved these lines:

“They spelled my name wrong! And what does L-I-E-K O-M-G HOT mean?”

Quickly Peter turned off the computer, fearing that the site would seriously damage his sister. “Just looking at some current events.”

“More like current trash,” muttered Edmund.

Excellent job with this! It's going to my favorites.

Hahahahah! Great story! It's funny!

“It seems,” said Peter, thoughtfully, “that in order for a story to be good it must have romance, and some people will go to any extent to get that.” He shuddered a little and muttered, “Does no one realize that there’s more in the world than romance—especially this sort?”


you do not know
how much
i agree
with that
!
so incredibly true
i'm not a fan of incest, or slash
no offense to those who are

but it's so hard to find a good fic
that is incest and slash free
i dont' really like romance all that much either

Capegio's review is basically what I was going to say. xD Us slashy outcasts. xD

But this was funny. I understand that people think it's weird. And I agree that if they did see some of the stuff we did, they'd be horrified. xD

So I'm not the only one that noticed! It was funny, too bad its true though! Thank you muchly!!

Praise the lord some one who finally understands! the madness around here has got to stop i swear sometimes i wonder about these people. I give this story two thumbs up though i agree the diaoloug could've been a little more in character.

Brilliant

YAY! Ok i don't have a name thingy on but i do read a lot of stories, and i must say it is WONDERFUL to see someone who actually has their head on strait! Thank you!