Nice... You put in a poem's format, but I didn't see any rhyme :) .

This was a beautiful, well written poem. It would make a beautiful song as well. This beautifully describes the fate to which Pluto and Saturn are bound. I'm rendered pretty well speechless by the beauty of this poem…

If you find a moment could you read my poem Aeon? I know it's old material but it is one of my favorite poems that I’ve written. Please tell me what you think, I'd really appreciate it.

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That was beautiful. I loved it. Awesome job!

Wow, very powerful imagery. Especially loved the repetition in the last the third and fourth line, really emphasizing the word "forever" in the second to last. And it has great rhythm too. Thanks for the 'fic!

very poetic

WOW...that was amazing! it does fit the two so well...