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xoli 2007-09-01 ch 6, anon.	abuseI can see a good plot there, but you should take more time to explore it, as the end seemed too rushed. I liked the tone and the language. One of the best things I was taught about writing is that when weaving a story it's more important to tie down all lose ends (i.e. explain all the whys and why nots) than to make events follow one another. I hope that helps
Das Null Katze 2006-12-16 ch 6,	abuseOkay! Your story was less then good. The idea was good and at first so was the writing but you seemed to rush the ending and it was lame. But good try
saavik8 2006-10-15 ch 6,	abusehey it was a good story but at the end I don't like how your style of writing changed but all in all it was a good story and I want to read more of your work...especially if Reid is in it...:) great Job
Alex 2006-10-08 ch 6, anon.	abuseNice story, but the end seemed rushed.
Misile 2006-08-13 ch 6, anon.	abuseHaha. Normal. Funny word. Awesome fic. POTC was wicked. I like pie. Seriously, though... this story was great. Please write more about poor Spencer.. everyone seems to like to torture the poor guy. FWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Goodnight. -Misile --SAVE THE HOBOS!
danielgirl 2006-08-07 ch 6, anon.	abuseHello! I loved the story, i didn't think it was at all cheesy. I really really wished that it was a little longer but other than that it was a great story. I love anything with Spencer. He is so cute, Isn't he? Anyway great job. Hope you do another one, i would love to read it! Ps. The new pirates movie is amazing. Loved it. Orlando is cute, along with Depp. Scary when Keira Nightley is the thrid prettest out of them. But i'm not complaining. Well, Great story. And i hope that you keep writing. I'll look at some other of your stories. Great job! Danielgirl
crazysquirl 2006-08-03 ch 6,	abusei love the ending. Reid is my favorite
JacobedRose 2006-07-25 ch 6,	abuseGreat ending! Can't wait for your next story!
Rach 2006-07-23 ch 6, anon.	abuseWhile I do love your story and am very happy that you have updated it, the ending did disappoint me. Like many others have said I too feel it was rushed. It might have been for your own personal reasons of not having the time to finish the story but still wanted to finish it. You had a great opportunity here to have the team pull together to help Spencer, take vigil over Spencer, etc. Even his recovery. I also feel like Gideon was hardly mentioned (if at all) during the raid, surely he would have been the first one to get to Reid. A lot more could and probably should have happened. You are a good writer and I know you are capable of a better ending. I apologize if this sounded harsh that was truly not my intention. I love your writing.
lil'spencefan 2006-07-23 ch 6,	abuseI have to say, that was another GREAT CHAPTER! I am completely IN LOVE with the line: “If his debt will not be repaid in love, it will be repaid in blood!” That was SO(continous line of O's that won't show up)AWESOME! The only thing I have to say is that, in my opinion, after my all-time favorite line (from a criminal anyway), the story seemed a little rushed. I would have liked to have known more about the drug Lucas put in poor spence and its effects. I know, I really rushed my ending to JIB; I think that we are so eager to please our reviewers that we don't take the time to write more in detail at the end and we just want to be done with the story. I'm sorry if I am being hard; heck, I'm starting to depress myself! (lol) Other than that tiny flaw, I thought that this story was EXCELLENT and really WELL WRITTEN! It will DEFINATELY remain on my fav's list FOREVER! I hope I wasn't that harsh! Finally, Keep writing, especially for CM, 'cause, truth be told, YOU ARE AN AMAZING AUTHOR WITH ABSOULUTELY BRILLIANT IDEAS! I'm not kidding! Phew, that was long! OVERALL VERDICT- A PERFECT 10!
FluffNutter 2006-07-23 ch 6,	abuseYour pacing is too fast. This story has a lot of potential but is lacking plot and character development. Take a second look and slow it down.
Reid's Girl 2006-07-23 ch 6,	abuseI wouldn't say cheesy... twas a tad rushed though... But I loved it anyway!
lil'spencefan 2006-07-09 ch 5,	abuseThat was another great chapter! Poor Spence:(! Anyway, please don't let there be only one more chapter! NO! I really like this story and I don't want it to end, but wait a second! My story was only five chapters long, so I shouldn't be complaining! lol! Anywho, awesome story, and please, pretty please, update soon 'cause I need to know what happens to Spence!
JacobedRose 2006-07-08 ch 5,	abuseHow are they going to find him? What was in the syringe? Please update soon!
Midgette 2006-07-08 ch 5,	abuseOkay, well, first of all, Johnny Depp is loads better than Orlando Bloom. Second of all, what a horrible time for you to get a life. And third of all...update soon. Cheers.

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