I really like your story and I think you should continue.

Cool write more PLEAZE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! O yea Davis and Kari were kinda of rude weren't they no it was Davis he should pay 4 the check!1

awww! continue! takari 4ever! ^_^ (include izzy!!! ^_^) hee hee hee! -izzychick, webmisstriss of all pineapples! ^_^_^_^_^_^

I am #5. I liked it so continue it and don't be so stubborn! T.K.'s #7? That's my favorite number!

that was good i hope u hav another chapter

i got 2 lazy 2 rite da whole name. n'wayz, kool story so far. u should soooo continue. and y make tk's couch quit da team? now datz just plain mean =P kill davish! kill davish!

Okay, this shows promise. No, I don't hate Takari stories, but it's kind of sickening when they're virutally THE ONLY Kari pairings you see. But this story looks promising. Nothing wrong with it yet, so go ahead and make more.

That's right, stop when it's getting good =)

Hope you keep writing!