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4kitty101
2008-08-17
ch 9,
abuse2 CUTE!
Airame Phantom
2006-08-12
ch 9,
abuseUhm...wow. Not exactly ehe dning I was looking for, but still good. Danielle's debut in your story was great! (definitely nto something I expected) Pretty good fic, might I add! Very good indeed!
Airame Phantom
2006-08-12
ch 7,
abuse*gasp* OH NO! SAM! DANNY, CATCH HER! Sorry, over-excited again. *clears throat* NEXT CHAPPIE!
Airame Phantom
2006-08-12
ch 6,
abuseDan! Dan! Dan! Dan! DAN! Sorry, over excited. *straightens shirt and fixes shirt* S... *clears throat* That was a good chapter. Nice ending by the wya. well, I'm off to the next chappie.
Tara P.
2006-08-12
ch 9, anon.
abuseYAY! I liked it a lot! (especialy the ending where they kiss) But u could have made the ending a little longer like where dash begs for dannys forgivnice(is that spelled right, bad speller) which i've pictured to be halarious! And where valerie apologized. please right more fanfictions, hopefuly with D/S fluff *ducks from numerous things thrown at by mad fans of D/V, D/P, S/T and others i can't think of* BACK OFF FREAKS! *pulls out chiansaw*
flarey phoenix
2006-08-10
ch 9,
abusebrill i loved it now make a sequel please it would be cool pwease
Brittney
2006-08-10
ch 9, anon.
abusedamn..., that is one hell of a good story. wish i could read some more stories like that. o well, life aint perfect...

brittney :)
KHshortfuse
2006-08-10
ch 9,
abuseaaw! that was so cute.
TWILIGHTLINK15
2006-08-09
ch 9,
abusegreat story, and AWESOME ending!
Andrew Laplante
2006-08-09
ch 9,
abuseHow sweet.
teddygeiger'sinsanecrazyluv...
2006-08-09
ch 9,
abusewoot woot! i loved that ending! it was full of fluffyness! I'm depressed it's over tho!! either way i loved it!
Andrew Laplante
2006-07-30
ch 8,
abusePleas go on.
cutereviewgirl
2006-07-28
ch 8,
abuseAWW SO CUTE!! now they all know.. and r cool about it.. AND HE'S COMIN BACK HOME!
-CUTIE
Horselvr4evr123
2006-07-27
ch 8,
abuseAh! I can't wait for the next chapter! PLEASE update soon! This is SO awesome! ^^
inuyashangel
2006-07-27
ch 8, anon.
abusei was too lazy to log in( i gotta cold) nice chapter! PM me soon!
saku
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