wow very nice! i loved it!

I am actually a Lina/zel or Lina/Xellos fans. But the poem was done so beautifully that I enjoy it, anyway. Well DONE!

So sad, poor Xellos. He and Lina get so few happy endings. It's even more sad because for a minute you think they'll be happy together. I love Xellos/Lina pairings.

As far as poems go that was the best Slayers story ever! (at least the best I have read so far) I was about to not read this but then I saw it rhymed. Poems that don't ryhme should DIE! Anyway great poem. I love Lina and Gourry but once and a while satisfy my insane head with the thought of Lina and Xelloss. Very cool poem. I love your stories!

Ah! I found this one again! I loved this one so much the first time I read it, sooo long ago, but what happened to the rest of the story? There had been more to it, but it's still awesome like this.

mom this was an interesting poem (translation) {this was a nucking futs funny poem}

from you son

BAKA TARO

aka brian

such a bitter-sweet story! I love your X/L stories, please keep writing them! Maybe you should write a story on this poem! So many ideas! _

Poor Xelly! I like L/G yet I like l/x...*pauses*...Poor Xelly! ;_;

K-chan

Wow, that was really good! It got me really sad for a moment there. I almost cried ; I really like the way you wrote this. Poor Xel. Well, anyways, Keep up the good work. -Kiwi

you seem to be a xe/lina, WHY THE HECK ARE YOU GIVING HER TO GOURRY? ah well...yare, yare...whatever works.

That's so SAD! Kinda depressing and all...too bad I'm L/G or I woulda been really pissed...O.o;;

Poor Xell... it's kinda sad how Lina ends up with Ol' Jellyfish Brains. (Dont' bash me, L/G people!) I've read many fics and poems like this, and I really like the way yers is written. Keep up the good work!

*sob... I will not forever hold my peace!

Oh, Lina-chan! Another sweet one! But as I've figured out, you prefer Xellos/Lina over Lina/Gourry, so...I guess, ya know? hehe...Sure am enjoying these!

How very very very sad!