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| cocopucks 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abusepls come back. i love romy fics with children and this one is intereseting |
| gambitfan85 2008-01-30 ch 9, | abuseI'm confused is Emma his wife or girlfriend? It said wife in the beginning of the chapter and girlfriend later on. Anyway, nice to see Scott being generous to Gambit for everything he's done for the X-men over the years. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work. |
| gambitfan85 2008-01-30 ch 8, | abuseThat's awesome. Who knew Gambit would be that good at the claw game. Didn't expect him to be kick out just for being that good. Well, you couldn't stay away from the institute forever. |
| gambitfan85 2008-01-30 ch 7, | abuseThat sux. Oh well, if they can't appreciate great talent then they can go screw themselves. Time for some fun at chuck e cheese. LOL. |
| gambitfan85 2008-01-30 ch 6, | abuseInteresting turn events. Thank god you didn't mention anything else from that writer's run on X-Men. |
| gambitfan85 2008-01-30 ch 5, | abusePoor Donnie. Had to feel the wrath of Gambit for a few minutes. At least everything seems to be looking up for the two. |
| gambitfan85 2008-01-30 ch 4, | abuseI'm not really sure what to say after Olivier got kicked out of school. Rogue's got a point. Gambit's got a point. But, we'll see what happens down the line. Now we get the news that Rogue's pregnant again. LOL. This story is great. |
| gambitfan85 2008-01-30 ch 3, | abuseLittle Olivier is the coolest. Sux that some adults can't be as understanding as kids are even though they don't understand the difference betweens mutants and humans. |
| gambitfan85 2008-01-30 ch 2, | abuseWell, screw the school if their bias against certain people. |
| gambitfan85 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abuseLOL. The things you have to do to get your child accepted to the best school in the county. |
| Jutwfiniei 2008-01-30 ch 10, | abuseWhat a fun story ! I think this story is everything you said it would be and more. I can't wait to hear more about Remy's first day of work. At first I was skeptical about reading this story because of the seemingly non-exsistence plot line, but I actually can't wait to see what happens next. |
| gambitfan85 2008-01-28 ch 10, | abuseEnjoyed the story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Professor Horatio Hufnagel 2008-01-28 ch 10, | abuseLOVE IT! As usual, your writing is clear, imaginative, and true to the characters. Nothing else to say really, I'd just be rambling on and on about how much I love this story. It's worth the wait ;) |
| ishandahalf 2008-01-27 ch 10, | abuseoh, huzzah for an update! it's been a while, so i was quite pleased to see something new. :) gosh, can i tell you how much i ADORE daddy!remy? him getting all sentimental at leaving rogue and oli was TOO sweet. i wanted to hug him. and speaking of people i wanna hug, beast! oh, i heart him too. i think you captured him perfectly. i hope we'll see more of him in the future. now, i can't wait to see how remy's new job goes... sure he's used to dealing with a kid, but a whole classroom full of 'em? oh boy... bwa ha ha. ;) so, yes. more please! |
| Ludi 2007-06-20 ch 9, | abuseNice stuff, glad I got round to finishing it (so far). Besides, I much prefer the real life stories to the superhero ones and this is no exception. It's nice to see how things might be for our fave characters in the real world. I noticed a few typos and missing words here and there, but these were no biggy. Like I said, you have a strong voice and a good range of vocabulary which you know how to use (believe me, these things make a difference ;p), and your dialogues sound natural and not forced or stressed. Hope you have the opportunity to update soon, I'm looking forward to reading what happens next. -Ludi x |