This was such an ingenious chapter that I can't even begun to describe it with words. I hope that one day you will add either a sequel (if you haven't already) or add more chapters. You definitely have a gift in writing -especially fanfiction- so please share your talent with more works! Kudos to you for you have enthralled me.
-kendra

*cue applause*

A very good story with plenty of action for Ororo. Maybe next time you could write a story so that Logan and Ororo are in love.

wow...that was really good. theres nop more words i could say thawouldn't be repeating that

so once again...wow that was *sighs* awsome and very original!

that was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Finally, a story combinin good writing,action,adventure,and romance! write more,please!

Wow! This was a VERY GOOD story! Remy AND Logan liking Ororo all at once! True love and great action! Poor Remy though. The ending was sad. Wish there was more!

Loved it!

*sighs*
I'm a huge fan of Remy/Ororo and Logan/storm

Ohmigosh! You can't leave it like that! You must write a sequel. (Seeing as how I'm months behind, chances are you already did...) Incredibly story for the movie-verse and the feasible entrance of Remy. Plus I loved your version of the evolution of Sinister and kick-butt Ro. I always thought Remy and Ro were just denying themselves. Plus, Logan always seemed like he'd relate more to Ororo than Jean, comicverse or not. Again, wonderful story, and I hope to read more from you soon.

man this story is off the hook!!!!!!!!!
So cool how you introed the ragin' cagin'
I am soooooo impressed......and slightly jealous.......

Misty

Great story

dude, this was good. i mean we never see this combination, and the plot worked and it was nicely written too

This is a great story. I hope there will be more.

WOW it left me breathless!!
-Mimic

great fic, loved it. But...there's always a but, there are things that can't be ignored. I'm not talking about Remy and rogue, instead my gripe is about Sinister. Nathaniel Essex has more of a connection to cyclops and Jean, than storm. Sinister's motives are to use the DNA of Jean and Scott to create a super-mutant. In AOA, that supermutant is Nate Grey, the X-Man. In our universe, it's Nathan Dayspring Summers (sometimes reffered to as Nathan Christopher Summers).

anywho, I'm not raggin' your fic, I just wanted to tell you info that kinda ground at me, since I'm a fan of both x-books and the movie. it's not hard to see that storm is your favorite character though. with storm, her nemesis would be the shadow king. gambit, pheonix and cyclops are sinister's little pups.

who wins storm's heart? write more