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| Mori Yousei Khickadee15 2008-08-11 ch 9,  | abuseWoW that was an intresting story iwas a little comfused at the end but i read it again and got it great work! |
| kiera 2007-05-17 ch 9, anon. | abuse"As your cold flesh brushes against mine I remember you, your visits, your lies, my lies, the truth. The birds chirp happily outside as I do." "And the colors are beautiful" . . . . . wow. 0.0 |
| YourAngelStandingBy 2007-05-01 ch 9, | abuseHE KILLED HER?! WTF! Very unique story... even though he killed her... But it makes sense, because that was just who he was. -Angel |
| Lilly 2007-01-15 ch 9, anon. | abuseDon't listen 2 Rain. But I kinda agree wit her. BUT I do LOVE the twist in the end! I never saw it soming! I mean DAMN!! Anyway I don't like Sakura. The only reason me & Rain even red it cuz we were bored. I loved it though. |
| Rain 2007-01-15 ch 8, anon. | abuseWHY DID U MAKE HIM KILL HER!!?? THAT'S SO DAMN CORNY!! OF COURSE I'LL FLAME YOU!! Though I don't really like Sakura much...BUT STILL!! Oh well. p.s.I'm goona have my bud Lilly review the story so...yeah. |
| Naze 2006-12-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou know this story reminds me of the book "A Mango Shaped Space" But its pretty good though |
| Soubi Shoukyaku 2006-12-27 ch 9, | abuseoh wow... that was definetly the most original fic i've read... i didn't see that ending coming... **... wow... i gotta say you did a great job... ^_^ |
| Jaded56 2006-11-13 ch 9, | abusewow!!...just..wow!..omg!..wow!!..im sori..its just AWESOME its so nice...i love the ending ehehe..u shud write lots of these stories...its so NICE!..ur lyk a GOOD writer ehehe..plzz write more ok..n update some stories 2..ok...wow!! -peace- |
| Crick118 2006-08-29 ch 9, | abuseWOW! That was great. I'm officially addicted to your writing. Damn you! -Crick PS:I think Gaara killing her was a great way to end, it DID sound like him! |
| eman555 2006-08-18 ch 8, | abuseHeh heh, told you I would. |
| Sweetblacksorrow 2006-08-15 ch 9, | abuseNice fanfic.! I like read the entire thing...today!! |
| BadBoysMistress 2006-08-14 ch 9, | abuseO.O... ... ... ... ... ... I have absolutely no idea on what I should say about this fic... umm... I guess I could say that it was like none that I have ever read before... Original if you will. I had NO idea what so-ever what you would have going on in it. I think (i'm not entirely sure at this very moment) I was creeped out by it, yet strangely intrigued... I'm weird, aren't I? The lemon was well writen in my opinion (GOD!! I feel like a pervert!) Well... uh... I kinda guess that that is all I can really say. My brain is kinda frizzled at the moment. ^-^~*~^-^~*~^-^ BadBoysMistress |
| Kunoichi Sabaku no Gaara 2006-08-12 ch 9, | abuseim so sorry i just realized today that you updated this i really dont understand it, could you maybe explain it to me, not the whole story just the last chapter its funny cuz im looking at the update date and notice that its on my birthday lol well i really like this story cuz ir portrays something you dont see that often, especially with gaara and i wish more people would write something like this (despite the fact that i dont understand the last chapter) keep up you good work ciao |
| Tigeret 2006-08-03 ch 9, | abusewow... thats really all i can descibe it as wow. I mean you wrote this story so straight forward, so prescise its amazing... i luvd it. i also loved what you said about your friend. I know it hurted probably but i thought that that was really nice of you to do. and Thank you ^_^ |
| Rachel Roth 2006-07-31 ch 9, | abuseThe End? Oh, well. I knew you wouldn't put anyone else |