Wow, that was so sweet at the end. I love how showed their feelings (to a point, anyway) without making it over detailed. I have read this story beginning to end, but this chapter remains my favorite. I love this story!

Okay, first off. I read this story because it said it was a Kaiba/Jou fic. I don't know anything about Amelda, and I don't care to. That was a part of the series I skipped, because it bored me. So, I'm sure you can imagine my annoyance when I'm about halfway through your story, and I see absolutely no hints yet of any Kaiba/Jou pairing. So I skip forward to the last chapter, just to make sure and then see that its not a Kaiba/Jou fic. I'm really annoyed, I take the time to read fanfics that are as long as this one, only when it is a pairing I like, not one that I know absolutely nothing about. Don't get me wrong, it was well written and everything, (though I do think Kaiba is a little OOC sometimes) but its not what I wanted to read. Please change the characters that it says it is about so other people don't have this problem. Thanks.

Your fic is one of my favourites on
I love how the characters seem to grow on you
good job !

my review as i promised, i really love this fic. it's one of my favourite fics. though i feel a little sad for ryou :(, but ur fics. r still the best :)

I give you a huge applause for your story. I loved every bit of it and you gave all of the characters a quality that made you love them, feel their pain, and. . . well. . . Okay, you get the idea.

Loved it and ,loved it again.

I think I found my warshipping crack. *smiles really big*

Ah.

Love it!! I was waiting for Amelda to say that to Seto! It's rather funny to see im try to powerplay like he does and get knocked down a peg or two. Love it!!

Love the Monopoly game idea. I rolled on the floor laughing as Seto was trying so hard to keep his earnings. Man that was great.

I'm going to have to stop here for the night, but I have read all seven of the chapters so far. I love how this is written. The mustache part was especially cute.

I think Alemlda is a very good role model for Mokuba. He seems to have the wisdom that Seto seems to lack.

I love how Jonouchi was so wise in telling Seto that he needed to be taught that not everything in life comes easy. The elevator sequence was a nice touch.

I have so much to say about this story, I'm afraid that if I take up too much space, I may drown others out.

In other words, I love it.

Okay,
First, I LOVE that you didn't have everything just be all honky-dorey for Seto and Amelda once they got together, even after Amelda moved in, because the characters you'd established wouldn't have been all "fixed" by that act.

Second, I LOVE that you kept all of the players IC, based largely upon canon and your characteriztions.

Third, I LOVE that, though they are together, it's not the usual "happy ending", but more of a sort of closure with obvious work still needing to be done with their relationship. (Reminds me of works by Nenya85, bnomiko, dragonwrangler and Rekall in that respect).

Fourth, I am suitably impressed by how well you wrapped that "dream" up in this story without actually saying it was "over". What I mean is that your usage of events and words to show the fulfilling of the "prophesy" was BRILLIANT.

And lastly, I appreciate your decision to take your time to flesh this story out completely and not rush to a conclusion and not force a nice and tidy conclusion upon us when the story itself offers too many variables and complexities to do so.

This is a very well done story and will be added my list of stories that I've read 4 to 10 times because I love them so. BRAVO!

WOW! Okay, back to the excellent stotyteller thing... I'm reiterating that now. I'm sure that I should go back and re-read the "dream" again to find the clues you've laid out, but I just can't wait to read the next chapter. I'll delve into it when I read this story again.

And rest assured, I WILL be reading it again!

*marks as a favorite*

Did I mention that you're an excellent storyteller? Pacing, energy, storyline and twists are all done very well.

*runs off to read more*

I SO did not see that placement of Ryou coming. Well done! And I applaud your continued bonding between Mokuba and Amelda and the excellent fleshing out of Amelda's character.

And I'm glad he didn't crash his bike.

I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. (Found it on ElveNDestiNy's faves list.) I will review again later, but I have to commend you on that blind date from hell. Absolutely FABULOUS! You managed to create a charcter who was so abhorrent that NO ONE would want her without making her campy or too fake.

And I'm really enjoying the bonding between Amelda and Mokuba. It surprised me at first just from it's existance and then from how well you've presented it.

*runs off to read more of the story*

Okay, I felt obliged to read and review at least one of your stories, and I am certainly glad I did. I'm sorry I didn't review each chapter, and this isn't really the most in-depth review, but it's 3:17 A.M. here and I have school tomorrow, so...yeah. I'm a bit out of it, but it's actually better for me to finish your enitre story in one night than to try and come back to it. Yes, your story is so wonderful, that if I was to try to sleep while only halfway through, I would be unable to. I can really see all the effort you put into this story (the extras? ALL the references? Either you're insane or extremely dedicated and perfectionistic (no, that's not a word).). It's making me feel incredibly ashamed of my own pathetic attempts at writing. Basically, I LOVE the enitre story! Heheh, I'm too lazy to go back and give you an example, but I truly love your wit in this story. Not to mention the fluff, I always like that too. Anyways, it's now 3:22, and I actually hope to pass my test tomorrow, so JA NE!

This was a very good story. It had some ups and downs along the way but all in all it was an enjoyable read. I like the pairing and hope to see more of it in the future. Be watching email for the critique I promised.