Ah! *cries* You can almost hear poor Demy's heart breaking. T_T I absolutely love this.

Aw, Wow that was so good! the line: “If I pretend I’m Roxas, would you pretend you love me?” That was so sad! honestly, I'm tearing up right now!

Also, I like how you explained that Axel pretty much chose to mope. other wise it might have seemed a little weird that he was so emotional, considering he's a Nobody and all.

Wow...just...wow. That was definetly one of the best things I've ever read. I cried. No, I really did. It was THAT awesome. Good god, you're a talented writer!

I've read a similar story, except Demyx was pretending too, thinking Axel as Zexion.

This type of story makes me cry T__T

Okay, I'm slashed out. It was a very touching story, though, and an interesting take on the characters.

That is really sweet of Demyx! Will you do more chapters. please?

Yes, yes that was VERY well-written and VERY deserving of the angst catagory. I felt a lump in my throat when I read those last few paragraphs. =')

Tears almost welled up in my eyes when I read this!

It's so sweet. Kind of depressing, but still sweet. I love it! Good job!

Adorable. Absolutely adorable. Sweet and sad... a melancholy love, hm? Awesome job - definite fave.

Aww. So sweet and sad.

Humm... I've read this one before too. xD I really have to stop reading and not reviewing, it's a bad habit.

I loved it- Keep writing-

I think I just cried. ;__;
That was so good.
I am not the biggest Axel/ Demyx fan, but that was totally sweet.
I love it.
Keep up the good work.
GAH. I'm going to go cry some more, okay?

--Sean.

This story was sad, and very touching...Demyx trying to help Axel; Axel wanting to be alone on that windowsill. The ending surprised me, but in a good way. I think that was sweet, but it could go sour if Axel depends on him too much...

“If I pretend I’m Roxas, would you pretend you love me?”

He reached behind him, fumbling until he found Demyx’s hand, and clasped it tight. “Yeah,” he whispered. “Yeah, I can do that.” He sat up and gave his hand a squeeze.

“Come on, Roxas. Let’s go.”

GREAT STORY PLZ CONTINUE MAKING THESE!

Me again. My goodness, you're so talented. And this one was just...perfect. Very in character, very sweet and also somewhat sad. The thing I really like is if Demyx ever did ask Axel if he pretended to be Roxas that if he would love him then, Axel would be very angry and tell him off something fierce. But you made it work, in my opinion. Again, great job, going on fav. stories list, and you're going on my favorite authors list. My only regret, once again, is that I didn't review earlier.

*crys* So good yet so sad. I so see this happening