ya know, this would be really good worked into a fic! you should try it... a starter, or somewhere in the first chapter! two things:
1) you could say 'i still do not' instead of 'i do not still'.
2)after 'there is a saying about first glances' put a ':' instead of a ','
sorry if i had stupid ideas...its just i usually don't give suggestions but i thought id try. its just so short and perfect, i thought it would be a good, easy one to give some constructive criticism on. GREAT!

HAH I like this shot too,very realistic!XD

Nice, erm, drabble. My mind's thinking it's Sojiro and Misao, ne? (it's probably easy to tell, but I'm being stupid today).

For a 116 word ficlet, it really has a lot of emotions tucked into it. I applaud your ficlet/drabble!

Saja_Natalia
Kasumi-kun

WOW, it's a BLASH ne?

very well, you have just done the greatest thing.
VIVA SM!!

you're very good, that's all about the first glance, great work!*clap*

i think this is a really great start to a story. its short and sweet and leaves a lot of room for wonder.

i cant wait for the next chapters. i do love SouMi stories..a lot. and there arent many great ones out there and i know this one will be awesome.

you have great spelling and grammar skills..thanks

i'll be waiting for the next chapter!

Hey..

Hmm.. Nice work.. Misao's pov captured in a retrospective moment.

Good job bringing out Soujiro..

I seriously love your narration and the way you describe stuff. ^^ That was really nice. :D