Great job. I really enjoyed your story.

OH MY GOD I love Jack NOT THE CRAKIN! CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE LAST CHAPTER
YOUR FAVORITE FAN!!

Gah! you got something in ur sleeve...I can feel it!

oh my god oh my god oh mygod I LOVED IT that was possibly the most amzing thing int eh world! UPDATE SOON!

WOW! GAH! Did not anticipate Willima Turner! But nonetheless, UPDATE! That was good!

yuck i want it 2 b jack and evie

Thats aewsome now you seriously have to get into about Jack and Elizabeth

wow that was a really good beginning of a stoy i loved it ... very well written good job ! When are you going to submit the next chapter it was so good i cant wait to read it !

Gah! I think I kno where this is heading! HAHA! Very nice..please update soon! Could ya do me a favor? Read "Rusted Pearl"...it's mine!

i´m a little confuzzled but do continue..update!

This is awesome. I love Evie! So her and Jack? Nice I love it but I have a feeling Lizzy will be ticked!! Awesome idea let me know what your thinking and feel free to bounce ideas off me.
Love you like a sister,
Mary

OMG!OMG!OMG!
I LOVE IT!
Epspecially the irony of how Evi meets Jack b4 Will and Liz want her too! Keep it up!

Oh, cool, another chapter! I liked this scene where the two meet. And I loved the mock mean look that he shoots her after she insults his walking! That actually made me laugh out loud, I could totally picture it all!

Del

I liked it. Update soon and give us mor eabout Evie

Nice start. I am really enjoying your story. I can't wait til your next update.