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| Rose Gilmore 2008-03-30 ch 1,  | abuseAww, that was really sweet! I love the whole "big guy like him, afraid of the dark." Total LOL |
| Cat 2 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abusebrill as ever. |
| breaktherules 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abuseOnly a talented writer as you, could invoke so many emotions in a short piece as this. Kudos! Short can be just as great as a long one:) |
| blue-fuzzy 2006-06-13 ch 1, | abusenot one of your usual long stories, but still enjoyable. :) |
| Amokitty 2006-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat you could evoke so much from a scant 285 words, is testimony to your incredible talent. I've been wondering if there would be any more stories with a focus on Peter's horrific imprisonment due to Ord. There's a wealth of riveting material to found there. What's really cool, is that not only do we see Peter dealing with the repercussions of his ordeal, but we get to experience the impact that it has on Kitty. This story is so emotional, and disturbing, and fantastic. That last line really got to me. I was completely fascinated. Thank you, Rose. |
| Xakko 2006-06-12 ch 1, | abusewow... just wow. short, succinct. but oh so powerful. you can sense Kitty's anger towards Ord. you can feel Peter's anguish that even her touch can't entirely dispel. great job... |
| anhayla1 2006-06-12 ch 1, | abuseAw. Nice one Madripoor Rose. Makes me want to hug poopr Peter tight. I'm gald they found each other, again. :) |