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| BettyHall223 2007-05-26 ch 1,  | abuseI love this story and now I have tears in my eyes. I could almost feel Jack's pain at the thought of losing Sam. |
| dark3princess 2006-06-22 ch 1, | abuseI really liked Jack’s line “Early? Actually, I was thinking I’m terribly late.” That was so amazingly subtle! Oh snap, he’s not late for the wedding, but too late for Sam’s decision…oh:) I love that about your stories. Anyways, knowing what happened in ‘Threads,’ I can imagine Sam running away like that, but it didn’t seem right for her to have let it progressed that far. That was the only thing that bugged me about it. great fic all the same:) |
| AudreyLynne 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abuseYa know, I never did like Pete anyway... :) Nice fic! |
| cinderella2122 2006-06-14 ch 1, | abuseawe how sweet was that i loved it!! JJ:P |
| getcarter 2006-06-13 ch 1, | abuseGreat job. Poor Pete *evil laugh* |
| TLWROX 2006-06-12 ch 1, | abuseI am extremely glad Sam didn't dump Pete THIS close to their wedding, but I loved how this was written and the exchange between Sam and Jack. Nice fic. “It’s a smorgasbord, Carter, pick your own cliché!” -EXCELLENT line! :) :) :) |
| froggy0319 2006-06-12 ch 1, | abuseHad me worried there for a moment when Jack asked her if she loved Pete, but I guess I should have never doubted :) |
| Anunnaki 2006-06-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was absolutely beautiful. So well done. Well written. All of it. But it just *begs* for a sequel. If you're ever in the mood for more muse, that is... :) |
| Ilovesg1 2006-06-12 ch 1, | abuseAnother excellent story Maggie. I was worried for a minute but Jack pulled it off. |
| janissima 2006-06-12 ch 1, | abuseVery beautifully written. Lots of angst but a completely satisfying ending. |