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| The Mad shoe1 2006-11-11 ch 4,  | abuseWow, these chapters was just HOT!! Great work. |
| momike 2006-07-05 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter,Good detail.I like the way u ended the story. I look forward to your next great KP fic and story update. Peace. |
| momike 2006-07-04 ch 3, | abuseMy thoughts on this chapter are as follows:I thought the chapter was done very well.What i mean is ii thought it depicted a man and is wife very well.It had a very tastefull feal to it.Not just sex between the 2.Afterall a honeymoon can't just be about the physicall part now can it.The amount of detail was great.I like the way u ended this chapter .Peace. |
| Zaratan 2006-06-24 ch 4, | abuseA amazing application of smuff; touching and heart-felt. Nicely done! |
| RC Williams 2006-06-23 ch 4, | abuseReally great story... AtomicFire had the right idea about doing a story when they get married in the states... Waiting eagerly with anticipation for the next installment. |
| AtomicFire 2006-06-23 ch 4, | abuseAhh, but could cousin Shawn stand up against TWO ninjas?? Nobody would ever need see the damage! Very nicely done, again very erotic while maintaining the feeling of a deep love that makes everything seem like it was meant to be. Ron and Yori looking back over dinner was a nice touch as well, realizing what had brought them to this point and what had to change to make it possible. Once again a great read! I look forward to more of your writing! |
| GhostWhiter 2006-06-22 ch 3, | abuseI really like your Ron/Yori dynamic. I've enjoyed this series even more than what I've read so far of your "The University Years" stories. Having Ron think of using a game of tag as a enjoyable Ninja training exercise to practice both stealth and pursuit & capture was an interesting glimpse into his "Ronness"--all of the other adults, including Sensei, missed how this child's game exactly paralleled what they were training to do, but not Ron. Thanks for sharing this series with us, and I hope you have more these stories planned for the near future. |
| RC Williams 2006-06-22 ch 3, | abuseThis is a really good chapter. Eagerly waiting for the next one. Until then... |
| AtomicFire 2006-06-21 ch 3, | abuseWoah! Hot stuff! Very well written, not smut like some 'M' titles can be but pure love in a written form, god help the ladies if you hook up with Harlequin! If they left the best for last the next chapter will met my monitor! Thanks for the awesome read! |
| RC Williams 2006-06-14 ch 2, | abuseThis is a great chapter... really can't wait to read the next one... until then... |
| momike 2006-06-14 ch 2, | abuseGood chapter,Uncanny detail.I have enjoyed the way u write out the tender moments between Yori and Ron it is not just constant sex like in some storys.To me the way u have written it out so far seems more realistic and down to Earth more like what a real couple would do.Also it is a Ron/Yori and not a Kim/Ron thanx for the change in pairings gives the readers something else to read other than the usuall.I like the way u threw in the game of tag between Ron and Yori and how u tied it in with their schooling from Japan.Well done in my opinion.I look forward to the next chapter.Update when u can.Peace and Good Night. |
| AtomicFire 2006-06-13 ch 2, | abuseIt's amazing to see the loving ways that exist so many years later in 'Full Circle' begin here on their Honeymoon. The game of tag was excellent, running through the treetops, taged and smootching... how could it be better?! Damn this series makes it hard to see Kim as the Lotus Maiden, it just doesn't seem right anymore. lol Thanks for the great read! |
| calamite 2006-06-13 ch 2, | abuseAnother great chapter to your Great stories Waiting for the next chapter to this story or your other stories. Calamite |
| momike 2006-06-13 ch 1, | abuseGood chapter,Good detail.I like the way u have started this Ron/Yori fic.Nicely done in my opinion.I thought it was not over done in fluff like some KP storys tend to be.It had a good mix of humor and romance.Update when u can.Peace and Good Night. |
| paulo-j1983 2006-06-12 ch 1, | abuseI could see Yori being a closet hentai and being into cosplay like La Blue Girl. :D Yori: {In a sexy ninja outfit} Come, Ron-kun. Do your husbandlyly duties and make love upon me. Ron: {Turned on by what she is wearing.} Yo...Yori?!?! Yori: I'll be the young, inexperienced ninja and you be the immortale tentacle demon. {Opens her top to reveal her bountiful chest} Slake your immortal lust upon me. Ron: {Nosebleeds and faints} |