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davincisilas@hotmail.com
2009-11-23 . chapter 22
I so wish that you finished this. Your work is amazing and just as you said you were really getting the plot rolling-every thing's so interesting and exciting and dark now-it's a terrible shame you stopped but I should have known. Every good series that I follow with child-like wonder ends up kicking my in the shins when I near the end only to find that it's not finished and hasn't updated in six years. It's always so disappointing. But enough of that nonsense-your writing is amazing and your understanding of the characters is intense. Best of luck.

-ShaBAM
SilverPhoenixRising
2009-11-22 . chapter 22
Wow. Now I'm really disappointed that I don't think that there will be an update because I was incredibly sucked into this story! I'm sad that Harry's identity was never revealed--I wanted to see that reaction with the Maruders and Lily and Holly and Rose. Overall, I'm just sad, because it's been over a year since you updated and that generally doesn't bode well for a story ever getting completed. Good job on what you did manage to plunk out, though! It was a fantastic story and you have a great writing style.
Googleyum
2009-11-09 . chapter 22
nice ending for the last chapter, i love knives vs. ugly snake faces :) i hope you haven't abandoned this yet
Crydwyn
2009-11-08 . chapter 22
This is a really well written story, however I can't help but feel pained that you stopped at this point. Seriously, could your ending scene have left us on any *more* or a tenterhook?! Fingers crossed that there will be another update soon!
Lolchen
2009-11-06 . chapter 22
Like it :D Though there seemed to be some minor mistakes, but I just can't remember them right now... something to do with either Peter, Sirius, or both... *frowns*
Anyway, nice story, quite in-depth and going a way I hadn't suspected. Different from others and Harry isn't !super *applauds* Now, I wanna know what happens next. Maybe have Sirius or Remus of this dimension find out who Harry truly is. I want to know which side Snape's on, though I want him on Harry's side. He's just such an adorable little git :) Your chapters seem to jump from end of last chapter to beginning of new one. It's not quite smooth, sometimes better than others, but seriously needs some work. Other than that, keep it going!
At least I hope you do. So I'm setting an Alert. I'll know if you don't update! *tries sounding threateningly and fails badly* Er... well, maybe just want another person from Harry's dimension to join: Hermione, Luna, Remus, Snape - anyone, really, that is surely on Harry's side and help out a lot.
Wonder how Holly and Rose will react to Harry being their long lost brother xD

Greetz, Lolchen~
babu'sbff
2009-10-26 . chapter 22
Wait? What! You just ended the chapter! Ah! It's a cliffhanger! I can't take it. Update please! I really like this story. :)
knitchick
2009-10-25 . chapter 22
I love your story but leaving such a cliffie for so long is just cruel.
Kitsune-Kyu
2009-10-21 . chapter 22
I love this story. When the next chapter will be posted?
DarkSapphireXx
2009-10-15 . chapter 22
This story is really interesting!:)
I really really want harry's family or maybe just one of them to figure out who he is. Probably Lily since she seems to be the closest one of the four to figuring it out...
major wallace
2009-10-13 . chapter 22
nice
dead feather
2009-10-12 . chapter 22
Just so you know, I'm keeping my eye on this story. Harry's fun although he obviously hasn't inspired you to update yet. *hmm*
dead feather
2009-10-12 . chapter 21
It was a bummer when Snape proved to be working for Voldemort. It just killed all the fun.
bananacupcakes
2009-10-10 . chapter 22
Please continue :)
I hope the Potters arent going to be all lovey-dovey when they find out who 'chris' really is.
Zaywex
2009-10-09 . chapter 4
God, the Moody scene is hilarious.
JustAnotherParallelDimension
2009-10-06 . chapter 22
I love this story but you just got to the really exciting bit and then...you haven't updated for over a year :(

Please don't abandon it, continue!
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