the last line is perfect.

Omg.

Your style.

/It is love!/

Really, I have to wonder how you do it.

I mean, there's so much /emotion!/

And it's so /vivid/.

And that last line.

x 13!

[goes stalk your other fics]

WAH! AkuROku is love and Axel shouldn't have died, dammit. :(

Awesome!

Wow. Just...wow. Very, very good! It flows so wonderfully and it's just perfect.

so sad...i hated it when roxas left axel, because they were such good friends...i wanted to reach into the video game and give blondie a good whack on the head...

and i was depressed after axel gave his life to help sora/roxas out...

Woah! Loved it! XD THIS WAS SO GOOD! :D

*Adds to Favorites*

DAYUM, WOMAN.

This was effin hawt.

So like ... le ttly:

[ FAVE story&fave FACE ]

'cause you rock teh whatevers

like oh, so, oh-so much.

:D I mean 4srs.

Can you say PWNsome?

SAYiTSAYiTSAYiTSAYiT.

Some super ZF00MiiE

MAGiC was going on here,

darlingdarling. ]

WAAH!

T_T

aw man, that scene made me cry. honest to God, i only cried at two scenes in KH2. the scene where sora got on his knees in front of Saix, and this scene. but this one was the more emotional of the two. :(

anyway, i really, really liked this one. i haven't read any decent akuroku in FOREVER, but i simply adored this. good job, makes me want to write my own.

(heyyz, bday-ficcie idea! whee! _)

FAVES; :)

xsynth.

ZOMG

the idea you have here is nice.

i like it, i like it!

hahaha

that was kinda random, btw

yea

hana

AKUROKU. [ kyutte one too ]

[ le SMILE ] this is a nice akuroku,

rene. xDD -. haha,

i'm talking to joo on MSN omgg [ le happy ]

sheez. plz write more [ normal pairings tho ]

i'm not into akuroku that much nemore.. but YEAH.

ILY ;3

[ FELIA ] -:

o.m.g.

Seriously I can't even begin to tell you how awesome the last line was. Like seriously I was said "Oh my god!" out loud and I never do that. Like ever. I never have, that's how pretty and awesome that last line was.

I wub you. For serious.

Kill Writer's Block and write more!

...

*e-crying, still* That was...sad. Very, very depressing. Then again, this couple is almost always depressing, especially when they're written well, which this is. 9.9 I always feel so bad for Roxas, but more for Axel, because he remembers.

I'm off to read your others now. This is definitely a fav.

Much

Do you still want a heart, then? Do you want this bitter feeling in the pit of your stomach, mean sour taste on your tongue? Rub at it hard, maybe it will go away, maybe.

And and - *SNICKER* druggo Dem. Gorgeous. And poke poke. But whoahwow...

Your writing inspires me. xP Truly. I'm feeling all "ooh! I must write!" moodish now. So sad...

You conveniently forget he’s a more deadly fighter than any of them, but it doesn’t matter anyways because these words are empty, hollow. Meaningless, remember?

Picking out my favourite quotes here...

Tally

PS- you're adding to my faves list quite considerably :P

hin...sad...Axel, Roxas, not quite sob.