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| dancingkatz 2007-07-06 ch 1, | abuseROTFL! Oh dear! Poor Fara! I'd love to know how he is going to explain this to Eowyn! |
| Violin Ghost 2007-06-27 ch 12, | abuseA touch of irony there, I do believe! This made me smile and laugh. I like your style of writing very much. :) |
| Celebne 2007-06-25 ch 12, anon. | abuseGreat written! Now, we know, why Arwen has to use Glorfindel's horse in the movies. *wink* |
| demeter d 2007-06-24 ch 12, | abuse"the lady's horse",eh? What better way to safeguard him than by giving him a brave elven horse for a companion in his wanderings. And, a nice nudge at our favorite fan-fiction author, Mr. Jackson. Roheryn, of course, did not make it into the movies. Asfaloth did, but NOT with Glorfindel aboard! Too funny! |
| lindahoyland 2007-06-24 ch 12, | abuseJust hilarious, I enjoyed this ! |
| Raksha The Demon 2007-06-24 ch 12, | abuseThere's something very sweet about Aragorn Estel Thorongil Wingfoot Strider Elessar Elfstone etc. excitedly unwrapping a birthday present. That is one very patient horse! And I love the last line. |
| lindahoyland 2007-02-27 ch 11, | abuseVery chilling, I can imagine it happening like this. |
| demeter d 2007-02-26 ch 1, | abuseHee hee hee! At about the point of "what do you expect me to do with it" I began to suspect. It sounds like Faramir has a new "pet"! The uncomfortable, formal mood, on the edge of breaking out laughing, is well captured! |
| demeter d 2007-02-26 ch 10, | abuseLovely! No, not "ladies" up to then. Only one very special one, lost too soon. You have beautifully captured a memory. Oh, I did not say in my review of #5, there is definitely only one couple to whonm the experience of watching the worl be reborn applies. Very well put. |
| phyloxena 2007-02-24 ch 11, anon. | abuse"Deferred, but stiffly and reluctantly" -- priceless! I wonder what catch they saw in his promises, why they debated and waited and didn't just seize the opportunity. |
| Raksha The Demon 2007-02-24 ch 11, | abuseSauron certainly sweet-tongued the nine Kings of Men! Though he did give them what he promised - power beyond Elves or Men, and endless life. But I doubt that 'life' was enjoyable. Well done, if rather shivery-evil. |
| Sarahbarr17 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abuseThis really made me smile! Sarah x |
| Deandra 2007-02-24 ch 11, | abuseVery moving piece. Greed will do amazing things to people, and there are beguiling voices all around us, reassuring us "this is what you want". Well done! - Deandra |
| faramiriel 2007-01-31 ch 1, | abuselmao! |
| Raksha The Demon 2006-08-09 ch 8, | abuseI don't think poor Denethor really understood just how childish and pathetic his jealousy was. So, his father liked the charismatic Captain from the North - Denethor was still Ecthelion's heir; and if he'd swallowed his pride a bit and put himself out to be pleasant to the newcomer, he might have outfoxed Thorongil and showed his own father that his own quality was finer. |