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What can I say about this fic? "Perfect" seems so inadequate...

Enjoyed your story very much. Really like the Sheplantis stories.

Looking forward to reading more!

Never enough Atlantis in charge stories, but this one is extra cute. The out of body, and the barefoot field trip really showcase your feel for entertaining detail.

Cute. I love Sheppard and Atlantis stories. It's great how Teyla cares for him and how quickly she understands what's going on because of her connection to him and helps.

Very nice! I love stories that deal with John's connection to Atlantis. I especially enjoyed the scene where he says "One at a time!" when both Teyla and Atlantis are trying to get his attention. I think it's a good thing Teyla was the one with him. I'm sure if any of the people from Earth had been, they would have dragged him straight to the infirmary and scheduled him for a psychological exam. Thanks for sharing. :-)

This was good. I like the way John talked back to the city. I love these Atlantis stories.

For some reason I like the idea of John talking to the city.

Very interesting, very cool. :) Excellent work and an interesting premise!

Oh I really liked it! Short and sweet!

Little whump..perfect!

Very, very cool. Loved it when John asked the city if she felt better. I also loved Teyla taking care of him and getting him back to his quarters. Excellent.

That was really cool!

Keep writing fanfics :)

Cute! you need a beta? send them over baby!

i really like that, its a wonderful idea. are you planning a sequel? because i would very much love to read it. you use of language it great too, and i especially like that Atlantis had a GOSH, mabey she'll teach john some ancient lantian jokes!

I like it! The idea of the city being alive was always a close/cool idea to me and you protrade it so well. Nice job!