Nice story of how both Don & Charlie have to examine their feelings and to overcome their fears. Thanks for writing.

Beautiful story! And the characters are so well-written, exactly as it would happen in the show. Awesome work :)

Natasa

great story!

great way to end the ch! but what the N. vs NP thing?

aw! haha instead of panicking when Don got in the way of the bathroom he should have puked on him lol he kinda deserved it for keeping him from the bathroom.

aw... that was such a sweet ending. that was a great story. i know (or at least im pretty sure) my brother would be really sad and sorry if he ever caused me so much pain. then again, weve never been that close. oh well. again, awesome story.

I liked the overall idea of this h/c story. I got a lot of enjoyment and enteratainment out of reading it. I'd like say though, that absent some futher exploration and explanation for Charlie's fear of Don after he had recovered, I would say that his response was not consistent with canon Charlie. There IS a way for Charlie to suffer the effects of trauma and still be recognizable as Charlie, but I think you did not lay a deep enough foundation to justify his response in this story.

Lastly, you get high marks for trying to be creative in your storytelling, but the constant switching of POV's when the scenes are so short, just doesn't work, and detracted from the quality of this story in a way that I don't think you realized.

Wow. That was amazing. I loved it!

very, very good story; poor charlie.

Awesome job! I especially liked when in chapter 6 Charlie was spacing out and he was talking about Don in Don's presence. That was really touching!

Excellent ending! Excellent story!

A little jumpy, but sweet.

Thank you for the closer to this excellent story.

Oh thank goodness they got past that! I am so glad the brothers are truly reunited. I hope Charlie really knows how much Don loves him!

YAY! You did such an amazing job! *blush* Thank you for taking my idea and making such an amazing job! *hugs*

I Love Al-luvs-Kitties02 idea! It would be perfect for an epilogue *blush*

Thanks again for the amazing story!