Wow I was literally stunned when I read her true name. For a moment I even thought I had read wrong! It was beautiful when Legolas realized that she was pregnant and even more to see the possible encounter of Legolas and Aragorn before he was even born.

Wonderful story!

A great story. Very well written.

Wonderful story, Jenolas. I definitely liked the unexpected twist at the end; never saw *that* coming. Thank you for writing this.

Very well written. A charming interlude, with Legolas in character and Gilraen believably noble, but kind.

At the beginning, I thought the scene was being set for another Legomance (although they are not usually so well written). So the twist at the end was a delightful surprise.

Oh this one was very well done! I thought it was very sweet.

Oh! That was lovely! Such great characterizations... such a neat twist at the end... just lovely, first and last! Thank you SO much for sharing this with us! What a neat idea! :-)

Cheers,

Jasta

Wow, the end was so surprising. I hope you update! Never suspected it was Gilraen...

oh! Gilraen and Arathorn! I wasn't expecting that in the slightest!

I quite like the fact that Legolas is slightly jealous. adds a nice touch.

another nice touch is that he can sense the babe. in a way, then, he's known Estel since before he was born...

very good! xx

Wow, that was unexpected. Never thought of it being Gilraen. Nice story, I like it a lot!

This is a really good start to your story. I hope you update soon.