I started reading your first posting 'Whiter Shade' and then when I got to where you'd left it was very frustrated! You can't imagine how happy I was to see you'd re-written it and this time with greater, fleshed-out detail. It's a very well thought out story line and I'm hoping you're going to finish it.

I very much disliked Wendy in season 2 but with all the arguing she and Kris have been doing, its inevitable they'll become a couple, huh? Well, its certainly better than nathan and Wendy (groan).

And since I did read your original version of this story (as far as you got, that is!). . . what the heck is going on with Kristin? Hopefully, you'll let us in on what's been happening to her. Hopefully, she and Bridger will be given the chance they, for some reason, never got in the series.

Great job. I love your take on things. Catch ya on the flip side.

Wow! great re-write. I hope to hear more from you! Thanks

WOW! I could feel Lucas' frustration at being ignored but you found Jonathan thank goodness. This was a great chapter and the story is building really well. I love the way we're getting snippets of back story without filling in all the blanks at once. Keeps us coming back for more. Awesome writing - update soon please!

Excellent chapter. I must say I was very disappointed with everyone ignoring Lucas. I loved his interaction with Kristopher! I'm glad that Ford is okay, and I'm guessing that Nani is really Kristin Westphalen. Do I get a cookie? LOL! Great as always. Looking forward to your next update.

Love,

Lynn
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Ah ha. I was so far half right and I am waiting for the next chapter to see if I am right about the other half. lol. Thank You so much for the update, it came it a great time. Please update soon. Great job:o)

Hey, I have finally gotten to read this right through and I've gotta say I'm impressed! The depth of detail says you have to be doing your homework. I hope it's Jonathan coming up the beach - otherwise please find him soon. Great job.

i love this story and cant wait for more. please tell me there is more on the way.
thank you
niki

Another great update. I hope the figure is Jonathon. I loved the interaction between Wendy and Kris. Looking forward to your next update.

Love,

Lynn
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Okay - people who write cliffhangers are responsible for writing quickly and satisfying people's need to know what happens next! We're waiting! Thanks for another interesting chapter.

"there feel better?" lol. Classic! I really love where you are taking this story. I can not wait for more to find out who the figure is. ( I have some ideas, but I will keep them to myself.)

I had a slow birthday. lol. Didn't really get to do much everyon was busy and my best friend of 12 years forgot it again. lol. This is the 5th year in a row. Ah, well such is life.

Please update soon.

Wow, that was an update and a half! I could almost *see* Krieg & Brody squaring up to one another, you described it so well. I hope they find Ford soon. Looking forward to your next chapter.

Love,

Lynn
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thanks for the birthday wishes:o) i love this story and can't wait for more. please update soon.

What a great update! I really enjoy how you're using the characters, and love the mystery you've set up for us to enjoy. Thanks for posting - I'm looking forward to reading more!

Interesting. I like the idea of Kris being an Uncle figure to Lucas. I wonder why so much of Kristin's record is restricted. Looking forward to your next chapter.

Love,

Lynn
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