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| Soccer-Bitch 2006-12-26 ch 10,  | abuseawesome story. i thought you did an awesome job on it. |
| AIOFanNCRM 2006-07-17 ch 10, | abuseI simply loved this story. It was really good and well written. Tim and Eva, cool! I miss Marisol though. I do wonder what they really will do in Brazil. I have seen what other people think wil happen, and I think that it will be a whole lot different. Can Fall ever get here? We have at least 2 months to go! Plus, I want November to come. That is when season 4 comes out and I want it. Marisol and Horatio forever! Thanks for the story, and it was really good! RM. |
| Sanqhian 2006-06-24 ch 10, | abuseI'm so dying to see what those two really do in Brazil. Fall can't get here so enough! Anyway. Speed wanted to be a dad. Now he has to watch over three little rugrats. I don't envy him! Good ending. Sanqhian |
| Sanqhian 2006-06-24 ch 9, | abusePoor Horatio. Poor Ollie and Eric, too. One minute everyone was happy. Now everyone is wrapped up in depression. Truly sad. Sanqhian |
| Sanqhian 2006-06-24 ch 8, | abuseOh my god, you made me cry! Sanqhian |
| Sanqhian 2006-06-24 ch 7, | abuseBoy, when Timmy wants to do something he just jumps right on in. More men need to be like him. And I love how he got concerned when the baby kicked. How cute! Sanqhian |
| Sanqhian 2006-06-24 ch 6, | abuseHoratio is going to need to give Speed some daddy tips. But he'll be a good father nonetheless. I like the pace of this story. It's fast and covers all the highlights without being boring or annoying. Kudos! Sanqhian |
| Sanqhian 2006-06-24 ch 5, | abuseWooh! Go Speed. I would love to see him punch someone like Marriot. It's totally part of his character. I love how you captured that. At least now they have some happiness. But does it last? Sanqhian |
| Sanqhian 2006-06-19 ch 4, | abuseBut is the baby his? There was that one time...with Delko. Oh, I hope the little bundle belongs to Speed. Sanqhian |
| bookwrangler 2006-06-14 ch 4, | abuseAs always, very good. I love this series. You do a really terrific job keeping everything in order and consistant. That's a hard thing to do. Keep it up! I want more. Greedy guts that I am. |
| Sanqhian 2006-06-14 ch 3, | abuseDelko driving like a madman makes me think of poor Ryan getting hit with that nail. And I love how Marriott thought he could buy Eva's silence. Money can't make the pain go away. I truly love the emotions of this chapter. Sanqhian |
| Sanqhian 2006-06-14 ch 2, | abuseI'd have said yes too. How sweet and what a way to propose! Go Timmy! Sanqhian |
| Sanqhian 2006-06-13 ch 1, | abuseOliver? Speed asking Eva to get married? Boy...this is going to be fun. Oh, is Oliver going to have red hair just like his daddy? That would be so cute! Sanqhian |
| AIOFanNCRM 2006-06-13 ch 1, | abuseCool! I can't wait for more! This was a really good first chapter. Love, RM. |