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Well that was a great insite on the life of Sasuke. I think you really caught how Sasuke fells about his brother.

*gaspeth* I love it... *claps vigorously* Good job! I wish I could write something like this when bored...

Love Echo X

wow! after reading this i feel like i can really understand where sasuke is coming from. this was AWESOME! it all makes perfect sense

Wo de ma ya... Thats so sweet ^^ And disregard meh random Chinese spews, but I liked the way the whole kill-Itachi goal was tied into once thinking him as a hero. And the second-person POV really helped x] Not like I am.

Xie xie,
Sai Ya

I have been reading and reviewing various pieces all day. This is the first thing that I've seen all day that I thoroughly enjoyed. I skimmed through a few of your other works, which I assure you I will read. critical_critic (at if you wish to chat. Authors such as yourself are a rare find. Maybe you are in need of a beta? An offer I extend out of delight as opposed to my previous offers out of disgust. Please keep writing, if only for the sanity of those with good taste.
Oh, and Lolita is a brilliant novel. The world would be a better place if Nobokav was shared in classrooms.
Critic
You are the first to be added to my community list. Take pride in your intellect.