Reviews for The Tears of Darkness

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emmiiee'ox 2007-08-28 ch 8,	abuseWell, I must say you described the playrooms perfectly, if not making them a tad more demented than usual... I could just hear that demonic background as you described it. ughh I hate that place... Herris was a little bit of a surprise because he kinda jumped outta nowhere. Quite the outgoing fellow ain't he? And I must also add you described the little tribe of goons quite well. That one woman seems to be a buit of a...hookah. But you described her well. I mean, everyone has pale skin..as. Lmfao. So good job, and I'm going to go read the other chapters. Yay ! P.s Zelda, really pisses me off. Heh.
Winged Knight 2007-06-11 ch 11,	abuseSo Legion is not as stupid as I thought he was. Still, his underestimating of these three is still a great one. Perhaps they could take advantage of it. Ganondorf appears to be shying away from the negative aspects of both himself and his power. Represion is never a good thing, and both negativity and darkness are not inherently evil. Cool story, I'm glad I read it. Keep writing the good ones!
Dark Raku 2007-01-12 ch 1,	abuseInteresting start and a very good idea for a story, there were a few spelling and grammer mistakes in there, but i really don't find small ones to be a set back. Continue this you shou. DR Also could you read my Zelda story The War Of Time and tell me what you think?
Myrr 2007-01-03 ch 11,	abuseI notice you haven't updated for a while, is this story still in process? I like it, a bit different from your usual story, the Herris and Zelda thing is a bit odd, but good. Wonder if Ganondorf will find love admist the horror...or not. Legion never thought someone would do a crossover like this, the only one I might add. I tend to not enjoy horror movies(because of the damn music), yet books and games do not bother me, like the characters they will eventually have to face, nice. You play TP yet? Keep at it and update when you get a chance.
emmiiee'ox 2006-12-28 ch 7,	abuseCool. It was kinda funny, with Dotour (or however you spell his name...) and Japas...he's hilarious! Potatoes! hehe. Damn that Legion. Mike beat his silly english-like ass! Ganon and Linky boy should go get him...Mike can beat anything! Legion, The 7 Grigs, Azzy, the Michelin man...Trevor...anything! haha... he got wine in him, and I laughed. He's an asshat. haha, "how pretty" what an ass clown. Anyway, I'd make some stupid remark about Pulse, or some other movie recently seen (Doyle: SHAKE 'N' BAKE!), but I'm too damn tired...Me and Jeremy were up to late pissing you off...haha. (Al sits bolt up "Will you pansy ass mother fuckers shut the fuck up!" -glares around- Trevor twitches "Uhngh") Yeah...cool. -emma lea -emma lea
emmiiee'ox 2006-12-12 ch 6,	abuseHAHAHAHA! Oh my god! JAPAS! AGH! I loved this chapter! dammit! Aha ha...ha... I'm good...I'd read the next chapter, but yeah, we have to go up town, so, yeah, later bitch! -emma lea
emmiiee'ox 2006-12-12 ch 5,	abuseFeckin Dinalfos! Those bastards! They killed the cool people! Feck! Poor Drake! He was so cool! ugh. okay, goin to read chapter six. later. -emma lea
emmiiee'ox 2006-12-12 ch 4,	abuseVery nice fight scene. Geez, you and your roundhous kicking. You frou. Anyways, I'll leave a longer review at chapter eleven...right now, I'm off to read chapter five... later SHINY FOREHEAD! -emma lea
Ralf Jones 2006-11-29 ch 11,	abuseWow great, keep going, ha ha ha ha ha this fic rules
KaizenYokoshima 2006-11-27 ch 11,	abuseA thought that just occured to me... Is that this story went quite a bit off track in terms of what was seemingly your original intent: the misery of Ganondorf in and of itself. But hey, it's your story, do whatever you please. I ain't complaining. By the way, your spelling has improved a lot, and I'm seeing no unnecessary tense changes. You're doing your mechanics right. Especially since I'm freakin' dying to hear just how brutal the follow-up chapter's battle is going to be. Oh yeah, that PM I sent you...three weeks ago...I think it's up...it's filled with entirely brutal carnage and graphic descriptions, check it out.
Biggoron 2006-11-27 ch 11,	abuseAh, well Legion sure is powerful and intimidating... especially if he can pretty much make Bruka piss his pants where he stands. Well, I'm looking forward to what happens next chapter. Hopefully, Bruka will be slain... anyway, awesome job.
RedWheeler 2006-11-26 ch 11,	abuseAll of them have alternative names... fancy. Right, well... poor Kokiris. Man, I'm going to miss Mido, even if I thought he was a jerk in the beginning of the game. And Saria hugging Ganondorf wasn't something I suspected... you'd think she wouldn't want to, even with the circumstances. Maybe that's just me though, he doesn't seem to be too huggable to me. Oh, and I like the HerrisxZelda moments. Quite cute! Amusing as well, make me want to react like Ganondorf did. So... no category for Majora? That's strange... I mean he was one of the bad guys! Shawn actually just started playing that game, only done the first boss and is stuck on the deku shrine thing... He's blaming the darkness of the game, I'm not sure if I should believe him. Be cool to see a one-shot about him though! Anyways, only saw a few mistakes. You used "Your" instead of "You're" with Saria when she greeted Link. Other than that, great addition to the story! Update soon!
black 2006-11-11 ch 10, anon.	abusewow good job, but dont tell that Zelda will Herris lover, that will be bad. but is your fic anyway. Ganondorf/Zelda rules. please keep going
KaizenYokoshima 2006-10-31 ch 10,	abuseGanondorf GIGGLING? Have you gone mad, man? But seriously, I really wish that I could describe fights so vividly sometimes. I often find those to be the most difficult to write about for some reason. Also noticed far fewer typos and little to no language there. Maybe it was just your choice, or maybe it's because I should have started my homework seven hours ago. But it's your style, keep with what works. One thing that I need to say is that it actually seemed a bit smoother without swearing. Just a thing I wanted to point out.
Biggoron 2006-10-31 ch 10,	abuseWell, well, Jack the Ripper's dead... good riddance. Legion's demon form must be extremely powerful as to be able to melt a Dark Butcher's brain just because it saw him. Well, I can't wait to see what is next. -Biggoron P.S: Whahahah!! My school's actually having a SSBM tourney. The prize money's as good as mine!

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