Ja, it was awesome! You must update it!

This was an interesting read so far. I'd like to read more, but no pressure, no pressure. I'll let my mind wander and make it up itself. Of course, it probably won't be as good as however your version would be--it is your story, after all--but it'll keep me occupied until I get distracted by something else. Oh look, yaoi!

If I was Cloud, I would have shit myself if anyone put a gun to my head and said they were going to kill me. Especially if Sephiroth said it to me. :)

This is a very good start and I'm disappointed to see that you haven't updated it in two years. If you ever feel so inclined, this story is definitely worth another chapter (or five). :)

-Cedar

Please, PLEASE tell me that you have another chapter ready for release!
I loved this, it was perfect in every way!

OMGosh! I really want you to update! This is a really good start!! Keep it up!

Poor Cloud, continuation yes?

More please.

i really like this...
poor cloud, my heart was racing for him when sephiroth held that gun against his head! what a way for someone to show who's the boss!
will be looking forward to reading the next chapter now, hope you don't leave it too long!

Nice. The only way is the SOLIDER way.

Yeah, right.

Great job, I loved how you finished this. It was absolutely awesome. :) The way you did Sephiroth and his questions really struck me as really original, and good original. :) Lovely work!

This was so cool! I can't wait to read the next chapter!! you should definaitly turn this into yaoi, sephy and cloud go really well together ^.^

Another great story from you, I'm looking forward to the update on all three of your stories.

keep writing!

Oh man.. Sephiroth can be pretty mean. x3 Well SOLDIER general or not, he's still effing awesome. Poor Cloud boi.. He's in for a rough ride. xDD

In my oppinion, very well written. I actually felt intimidated by Sephiroth. xDD;;

Ah! This is very nice!

Well written and entertaining, to see what Cloud's adventures through ShinRa Army.

I hope you update soon!

I WISH TO HAVE YOUR CHILDREN *hugs* Sephy + evil = teh shit
I love yoou.